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Escarot

I came back to myself on my knees.

A massive headache throbbed behind my eyes painfully, leaving me disoriented. Why was I kneeling? One second I was mid-swing, pouring everything into an attack, and the next I was face-down in the dirt, hands digging into the ground as I gasped for air, sweating.

Whis stood over me, his staff planted firmly in the earth, watching me with an unreadable expression.

"...What happened?" I asked, hoping for an answer.

Neither of them answered right away. A few meters off, Beerus stood with his arms crossed. His tail was uncharacteristically still as he stared at me. He looked intrigued, but it wasn't his usual twisted amusement—it was something different, what exactly, I wasn’t sure.

I forced my legs under me and pushed myself up, having to freeze for a second until the shaking stopped. Every nerve in my body screamed, but it didn’t feel like the normal exhaustion of a brutal sparring session, this felt different on a fundamental level… How exactly? I wasn’t sure just yet.

"Did you knock me out?" I asked, looking toward Beerus. "Everything hurts.”

"No," Whis shook his head.

He crouched down to my eye level, which for him… was a rare, unsettling gesture of genuine attention.

"Escarot. There’s no other way to say this, so I’ll go out and say it. A moment ago, you were about to kill yourself."

I… what?

"Oh, don't be dramatic, Whis, you'll frighten the boy." Beerus uncrossed his arms, as the familiar cat-like boredom that was characteristic of him bleed back into his voice and posture. "I wasn't going to kill him. He got carried away and threw a tantrum… So what? Mortals act out here and there, gods put them in their place. It’s not a big deal, besides it's not the first time I've had mortals go feral on me before without destroying them." He sniffed, turning his head. "Frankly, I was starting to enjoy it."

"That is not what I meant, my lord."

Beerus blinked, shifting to scratch the back of his ear as he yawned. "...It isn't?"

"No." Whis stood up, turning his back to me to face the God of Destruction. "I did not intervene because you were going to kill him. That thought never entered my mind. You could have ended him with a flick of your finger, and I wouldn’t have lifted a hand to stop it." He gestured back toward me with his staff. "I stepped in because he was a danger to himself."

"I’m… incredibly confused," I interrupted, looking between the two of them. "Because I feel like crap, but I can’t remember the last few moments of our fight, and this conversation isn't exactly clearing things up for me."

"In a moment," Whis replied, turning his gaze back to me. "First, I want you to tell me what you remember about the fight."

"Well…," I started, racking my brain. "I rushed Lord Beerus. He flicked me across the field. I got back up, charged him again, but he kept dodging. I kept missing—"

"Keep going."

"—and I kept—"

I remembered the frustration. I remembered wanting to land just one hit so badly that my chest hurt. I remembered the blinding heat of my own anger… and then, a void. A total blackout.

"...Huh."

"Just as I imagined," Whis replied.

"No, hang on." I pressed the heel of my palm against my forehead, trying to force the memory loose. "There's a piece missing. How much time did I lose?"

"About ten seconds."

Ten seconds.

For the first time, I actually looked around at my surroundings. Where the training ground used to be, there was now a massive, shallow crater. The center of the ground wasn't cracked, it was a solid sheet of blackened, melted glass. Jagged scorch lines fanned right from the spot where I was standing.

"I did that?"

"You did," Whis replied, tapping me in the head with his staff. "And you would have done considerably more if I hadn’t stopped you. Shall I tell you what I saw? I think you need to hear it, Escarot, because if we do not address this soon enough, it will happen again, and many will die."

"...Yeah." That was an ominous threat if I ever heard one.

"In short… Your body was producing energy faster than it could spend it."

Was that even possible?

"That... doesn't make sense," I muttered, looking down at my trembling hand, which if I looked close enough, I could see a faint, erratic green static that moved around my arm, stinging like a thousand needles. "At least, I think it doesn’t...."

"Normally, it doesn’t…" Whis said, as he took a slow step forward, the base of his staff tapping lightly against the vitrified floor. Clink. Clink. "But what I witnessed in those ten seconds changed a few perspectives I had on the matter. You became a reservoir that was rapidly being flooded from a source with seemingly no end."

Beerus let out a sharp, amused huff. "A walking bomb. Now that would’ve been fun."

"Perhaps, but then who would’ve cooked your favorite dish, my lord?" Whis replied, before turning his attention back to me. "Escarot, when you lost your temper, your baseline power didn't just spike—it began to multiply exponentially with every heartbeat. Your cells were mutating under the stress of your own anger. I watched your muscles swell, your eyes cloud over into a blind, white void, and your ki... your ki turned into something… entirely different."

No, no, no… no no no no no, that… this can’t be happening to me. I can’t be that, I… no, NO!

"It was heavy, in a way," Whis explained as he raised a hand, creating a small, glowing holographic projection of a humanoid figure between us. The figure’s energy pathways began to glow a violent, unnatural green, expanding until the lines began to rupture. "Normally, when someone powers up, they push their energy outward as what we call, aura. It's a controlled release. But your power was rising so quickly that your natural output channels couldn't handle the volume. The energy was backing up inside your own flesh, and due to your body not being fully developed yet, cooking you from the inside out."

He looked me dead in the eye.

"If I had not struck when I did, the sheer pressure of your own power would have vaporized your vital organs. You would have detonated, taking this entire solar system with you."

I… was that… monster, that psychopath, I was the Legendary Super Saiyan, not Broly. I wasn't just someone reincarnated as a Saiyan, trying to survive this dangerous world, no; I was a ticking chronological anomaly destined for madness, and if the universe was lucky, a catastrophic end.

"I believe this is what your people call… The Legendary Super Saiyan," Whis added, watching my face pale as he said that. "A fascinating, albeit tragic, biological anomaly. A warrior born with a power that cannot be contained by flesh."

"I… I almost killed everyone," I whispered, my voice sounding incredibly small as I looked down at the erratic green static still bouncing on my skin. "I almost blew up a solar system because I got mad?"

"Oh, don't undersell yourself, kid," Beerus chimed in, floating over with his ankles crossed, looking down at me with a genuinely wicked grin, he didn’t see the problem with this. "If Whis hadn't poked you, that exponential spike would've kept climbing. In a decade or two you might give me a real workout trying to contain you, without destroying you that is. It's a pity I have to wait that long. I haven't seen a mortal go completely feral like that since..." He paused, his golden eyes narrowing slightly as he glanced at Whis. "...Well, it's been a very long time."

"Lord Beerus, please do not encourage the boy's self-destructive tendencies," Whis scolded gently, though his focus remained locked on me as the green holographic figure between us shattered into glittering particles. "Escarot."

I forced my eyes up to meet him.

"I can see what you’re thinking… I know that right now, you are viewing this as a curse," Whis said. "And if you leave it untamed, you will fulfill that exact destiny. You will lose your mind to the bloodlust, your body will become a vessel of pure destruction, and Lord Beerus will be forced to erase you from existence. That is the path of least resistance."

He leaned in slightly, the tip of his staff glowing.

"But there is another path. Your energy channels are narrow, unaccustomed to the violent volume of your true power. We must widen them. We must forge your physical prowess through a discipline so absolute that your mind retains its sovereignty, even when your power attempts to drown it."

Paragus and Tomat.

Meanwhile, several light-years away in a completely different quadrant of the cosmos, a very standard, totally oblivious Saiyan squad was moving.

Paragus adjusted the collar of his standard-issue armor, frowning at the digital display of their scout ship. Next to him, his mate, Tomat, was aggressively scraping the dried grease off a piece of beast jerky with a combat knife. They had been on a tracking mission for a while now. Eating nothing but low-tier rations, all while suffering a multitude of mechanical failures, with zero reception from the home base.

"The tracking sensor is still looping," Paragus grunted, slamming his fist against the console. "The PTO tech support line has been on hold for months. If I have to listen to that orchestral looping anthem one more time, I’m going to kill myself."

Tomat didn't look up from her jerky. "More food for me."

"That’s helpful!" Paragus snapped, crossing his arms and looking out the viewport. "I need to have the performance review ready… The PTO logistics officers are notoriously unforgiving about late reports. If we don't turn in this quadrant mapping by next cycle, they’ll reassign us to a garbage disposal station."

"Maybe," Tomat snorted, finally biting off a piece of the jerky. "But… that’s your problem as the commanding officer of our squad, isn’t it?"

Paragus sighed, rubbing his temples. "I suppose you're right… I just hate being out of the loop. I tried pinging the main Frieza Force planetary network this morning, and the automated system told me the entire organization had been 'permanently liquidated due to structural rearrangement.' What does that even mean? Corporate restructuring? Are they merging with the Cooler Corps?"

"Probably a tax write-off," Tomat said wisely, waving her knife in the air. "You know how the upper bastards of the Cold Clan are."

"Taxes? Now that’s funny," Paragus rolled his eyes, his mate had a particular sense of humor he found… endearing. "At least, I managed to send a short-range message to Escarot’s team… before the long-range array was completely fried."

Tomat raised an eyebrow. "What did you say?"

"Send another ship," Paragus said. "And to bring more food, I am tired of the jerky."

Tomat smiled, leaning back in her chair. "Sucks for you, I love this shit."

“That’s because YOU eat anything,” Paragus replied.

“Well, I don’t see you complaining when it suits you,” Tomat snorted, and Paragus blushed slightly.

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cornbringer

Don't forget to comment, it feeds my writing heart to read your thoughts, theories and shit. #CORN

Connor Haggerty

Ah shit is this a third sibling? Can they go 3 for 3 on the genetic lottery?

Rodzilla

Oh, does Escarot think Broly's not a legend? He's in for a rude awakening. Big brother Escarot will pave the way forward for Broly to control his power come the future. ♥️

Rodzilla

If Chronoa finds out, she's gonna faint on the spot- accidentally teleport back to the timenest, and land camatose on top of TokiToki, who's nesting in Trunks' hair while he's trying to sort the scrolls

James Baxter

Oh, so Whis thinks Escarot can control the Legendary transformation? It’s certainly a goal, and something for Escarot to train for. Does this mean he’s going to shift to focus on the more “spiritual” side of Martial Arts now, at least until he grows up? If he finishes his Yardrat training, visiting Earth might be more important than ever, and while the masters like Roshi, Korin, and Kami might not be able to make him much stronger, I’m sure they all have a some trials and training that he could do to help him master his emotions. I wonder how Okara will feel about all of this. On the one hand, this handicap on Escarot means that she’s going to be able to tap into more of the Super Saiyan transformation than Escarot (without losing control), meaning she can become stronger than him, for a while. But on the other, this is confirmation to her that Escarot isn’t her peer: he’s *stronger* than her, and always will be… **unless** she trains beyond her limits!!! I think after the angst, she’ll make peace with it, and have a lofty goal of training w/ Whis to achieve something like Ultra Instinct, which *could* put her on par with, or even help her exceed, the Legendary Super Saiyan transformation. Plus, she might see the training as necessary; Whis isn’t always around, and should Escarot ever lose control when he isn’t, Okara very well could be the only person capable of saving Escarot, and others, from himself. Lol, Escarot’s parents were on a milk run; that’s *one* way to explain where they’ve been all this time. So they’re stuck in the same ship? The other broke down & they couldn’t call a PTO repairman… because of Escarot & Okara? Broly’s about to become a quiet middle child, it seems…

Dragon Cross

I thought Paragus knew about Escarot being king

NoMeme

Tftc! Well, I'm not sure if anyone is capable of controlling the LSSJ transformation, but in the manga it looked like Broly was starting to get control over his own variety of it, so we will see. I feel bad for Okara, once Escarot gains control, he will forever be stronger than her. She'll have to find a different way to bridge the gap. If Escarot is having another sibling, what if it's actually the original Broly, just going by a different name? That would certainly be interesting!

cornbringer

He does, what he doesn’t know is that Frieza, Cooler and King Cold are dead

Blacklionpride24

Love it can’t wait for the next one ☝🏾 and is there going to be a time skip, also I feel there should be more challenges and a little more twist. But that’s just me nitpicking I love it

cornbringer

There are a lot of challenges ahead, but I’m open to what you have in mind.

cornbringer

If you are worried this little event will make Escarot overpower every challenge, then worry not, I have different plans for this, this is but… a stepping stone in a way.

Dragon Cross

Oh boy he in for it then lol if he had a hard time with him killing king Vegeta and becoming king then I think he might die of shock when he finds out Escarot is a lssj and he killed Frieza and his father

cornbringer

But please do share your ideas. I’m genuinely curious.

Blacklionpride24

I’m not worried about him being overpowered you’ve been killing it and grabbing my attention all 124 or 125 chapters and I’m right down some thoughts and send it to you

Phillip Erickson

Sounded more physical than that, talking about forging his physical prowess through discipline. so probably both physical and spiritual

Sangunius the glorious golden hawkboy

Ok so this is a half joke but if they genuinely have kale his parents are going to be in either massive danger because one is a anomaly twice is a coincidence and three times there’s something in both if they’re dnas that’s making this happen and i said either because if there is then i can actually see beerus kidnapping them and making them pop out kids because hey ill get a bunch of fun playmates that can in a relatively short time actually give him a fun fight

Anthony Maxwell

I'm confused the OG DBZ broly didn't black out and become a rage monster and forget his actions when he transformed what it actually did was remove his inhibitions and brought forth the most evil parts of his psyche. The OG broly transformation was also initially a stable transformation with mind altering negative side effects.

cornbringer

OG gave himself to the transformation entirely, which is why he didn’t change, he was entirely crazy.

Deathknight134

Huh...are Paragus and Tomat stranded on another planet instead of it being Paragus and Super Broly? That'd...be certainly a change. 🤔 But damn, Adamantium Will to control the Z Legendary Super Saiyan? That'll be absolutely terrifying. He might become even more terrifying than Heroes Z Broly too!

Deathknight134

That honestly sounds funny, lol. Beerus having his Legendary Super Saiyan Farm to have worthy opponents whenever he hungers for battle sounds hilarious.

Deathknight134

Hmm, we know there's a Legendary Variant of Saiyan God as seen with God Broly, but is there a Legendary SSJ4 by returning to a Saiyan's primal roots and heritage? (I'm ignoring DB Heroes for this question)

Sangunius the glorious golden hawkboy

As funny as that sounds think about it this isn’t a crack fic so it’s Less hur hur funny and more something is up with the parents as they seem relatively normal for saiyans yet two of the are monsters and if the third ones also a monster then that needs to be checked out

Shadow

Oh yeah, Legend against Legend is gonna be Peak in the future. W chapter.