Another Quick update. (Patreon)

Well, this is why I like to let a story marinate before posting, but it's my fault for running behind schedule. I made a few more changes. Nothing that changes or adds to the action, but it does make the story flow better. So. If you don't care about story, you're not missing out. Once again, there is a new download link in the original post

The changes are as follows. New/additional pages 1 and 2, and changes to the dialogue in pages 49,50, 93, 94,95.