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CAITVI FANCOMIC WIP Pages 58-60 SFW (Patreon)

Published:
2025-11-20 16:43:38
Edited:
2026-04-10 09:46:22
Imported:
2025-11
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JUST REALISED I MISSED A WORD IN PAGE 59: "what happened between Jinx and I wasn't ABOUT the two of us"

this is a prime exemple of me knowing for SURE im going to change the dialogue. page 58 and 59 dialogues is just too "on the nose" to my taste in a sense, too long winded and "expressive" and of course, i dont feel it being very "caitlyn like". this is just the substance of what i want her to say but it'll have to change.

anyway, almost there and thennnn inking! i still dont know if i'll try a new brush or a new way too color...... i'll try some things out and post it all, see what you guys think when we get there

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WeeeDangit

I can see what you mean, but I also love that you can see that and know when to back off in your storytelling. Adds beautiful layers to it and a bit more "show, don't tell".

V

It’s amazing the understanding you have of the characters, loving this story (and all the previous ones) 💗

Deysi M.

I really like the story you've created; it's very profound to see the implications for their children. Our past never leaves us, but it's important to accept it.

Moon lesbian

Dang. To be fair, there aren't any true heroes in this story, and even Vander, who was a peacemaker, was also a killer for some others... But I'm sure Camille will understand the Pov. Great continuity! I can't wait for more!

CVKiramman

Oh Darling, YOU ARE HERO! Vi is happy, Vi is safe, you changed, You are an amazing mother and Wife, you have redeemed every single mistake with the love you gave for both of the cities, for the love of ur family YOU ARE A KIRAMMAN, A ZAUNITE’s WIFE😭 luckyseven you have broke me in so many pieces, I needed all your magnificent art/stories YOU ARE EXTRAORDINARY!! Im here talking to a drawing of Cait as if she will listen 😫 Luckyseven what are you doing to me!!!