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mmmmmmmmmmmh will probably maybe rework this page. looks fine but idk i feel like the lighting can be better. especially in the first panel, i really want to mark contrast between foreground (caitlyn) and background (the rest of the room/vi). might edit if i find how to do that ahah.

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Dani D.

Cait 🥺🥺🥺🥺 someone give her a hug PLEASE.

Takren Dracus

Wow i need to know where this conversation Will go. The two of them needs to hug eachother

WeeeDangit

I love it, regardless, but I think it may be a matter of up-ing the contrasting colors from warm yellows and reds to deep purples and blues. It almost feels like there needs to be a warmth projecting out from behind the open door and Vi, but I don't know if that would lose her silhouette or change the emotion(s) she may be feeling that you're trying to depict.

Mizuki Scarlet

I need to consume your art 😭😭 I love the angst 😔

Kit

Its so funny I was about to say how much I love the lighting in this scene. Then I saw your comments. I think it looks beautiful. All the light is around their scan pic which highlights the importance of what she is holding (to me anyway).

luckyseven🍀

yea i think you're right, i'll be trying things in this direction... thank you!!!!!!!

luckyseven🍀

aw thank you! i do think i did a good job but the artist existence is all about being dissatisfied with your work so you can progress.... im super glad that you enjoyed the work to highlight the dscan! im proud of it! 💚

WeeeDangit

Make no mistake, you're feeding beautiful artwork and storytelling to the hungry masses, but I also understand just feeling something is off in one's art. Like, you have the idea inside but can't figure out how to visually translate it just right. You're awesome 🥰

Mx. Hoodie

The lighting is perfecttttt

IndyL

Oh my God, my heart she was looking for answers, and all she found was more question🥺😞 they’re little bean🥹 Caitlyn needs a hug. The storytelling an art in this comic is incredible.

Kit

I write fics and I can’t stop editing them, so I know your pain!