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YOU CAN SUBMIT YOUR IDEAS UNTIL NEXT FRIDAY MIDNIGHT (December 3.)

YOU CAN NOW SUBMIT THE FIRST ROUNDS WINNING IDEAS AGAIN IF YOU WANT. BUT CAN'T SUBMIT ANY OF THE SECOND ROUNDS WINNING IDEAS , BUT YOU CAN ADD THEM AGAIN IN ROUND 4. THESE WERE:

The player gets a totem that can reverse one of the changes, but in   exchange she turns into a stripper. Can be used later in the game.

The player is getting super fake looking breast implants.

The player is getting a summer beach babe look with a dark tan and blonde hair.

The players lips grow fuller and fake looking.

The player gets some cat features, like ears, claws and a tail.

OH! AND DON'T FORGET! YOU DON'T NECESSARILY NEED TO SUGGEST ANY PHYSICAL TRANSFORMATION, IT CAN BE SOME KIND OF TEMPORARY ONE ROUND PENALTY AS WELL. LIKE A STRIPTEASE SHOW, DO SOME "ADULT ACTIVITY" OR JUST GET ON THEIR KNEES AND BARK LIKE A DOG. THE LIMITS ARE ONLY YOUR IMAGINATION. 

Hey guys!

The time has once gain arrived to suggest the "Trials" third rounds penalties. You can pretty much submit anything you would like to see, but if the idea has some technical or practical difficulties I might ask you to add another one.

Please try to add just one idea and not a super complex multy TF one. Or maybe start a little slow and then build up the heat in the following rounds, but that's just my opinion.

Also, just some examples what ideas you can possibly suggest.

It can be a simple, moderate or major physical or mental change.

Some kind of activity that they must complete during one round.

Different constructs can appear magically that they can or must  interact with.

They can also have interactions between each other, but in this case you CAN'T specify the partners or pairings. That will be decided by luck.

There can be even some penalty with a positive effect, like do this or that and you can regain some stats or get rid of some extreme modification.

But these are just some examples. At the end it will be all aup to you guys... hehe

There are a few rules that everyone should follow when submitting ideas.

Don't ask for gore.  I really don't like to make them.

Underaged (The characters can get much younger, but then no mature content)

No racist jokes. But racial TF is still ok.

Please, no political or religious things. I know everybody has an opinion, but I don't want to hurt anybody.

No torture or rape, but humiliation is fine.

Please don't ask to kill the character..

Please, no novel sized transformation sequence.

This list might change in the future. And if you have any question before submitting your idea, please feel free to do so :)

Comments

Bianca

They’re libido increases with every complaint they give until they orgasm, but can only orgasm from full sex

DB_Explorer

They start acting how they look ie the girl that now looks like the mom acts like the mom, etc.

Grant Nordin

Succubus transformation for one?

Jaunien

The players thicken with hip and ass expansion.

A Big Guy

African American race change?

Kuro7

The player becomes a thick, busty shortstack.

JRM

They are all quite clever a good IQ drop might have them slipping hehehe

Felixfalck

I second this. Perhaps accompanied by a small transformation that further emphasizes "how they look" as to avoid an anticlimactic chapter.

Felixfalck

For chapter 1 i proposed "moral degeneration" which quite a few people seemed to like. So I'll use my vote here i guess to propose it once more. I am however concerned that the chapter, if moral degeneration were to win, would be sort of stale with simply a change in attitude. So perhaps make it so that the character in question gets a little reality rewrite so that they've always been that way? They should all be aware that the change happened and remember how the person used to be. Their body should also tell the tale of having lived a more morally ambiguous life, so not just a moral degeneration, but a complete degeneration. Tattoos, piercing, hairstyle/color. Perhaps some minor surgeries, facial/body.. The physical changes should really just be emphasizing the previous changes. The mom in daughter's body will suddenly get memories of actually growing up as the daughter's and the daughter in the moms body will get memories of being a mother. Given the nature of the body swap it really would make sense for the reality rewrite and memory alteration to apply to both. Only one however needs to undergo any sort of degeneration. Perhaps you could make the mom a couger to further emphasize the milf vibe. If she gets that roll odfcourse. I'll leave the details up to you, just wanted to propose some examples to help explain my idea . I dont want to go overboard here, but i do believe that some physical transformation is needed to spice a chapter up. Especially when theres such a big gap between each chapter in terms of release. Sorry for the long proposal though. I just really like your work 😅.

Kurt

I would like to suggest a 20 year age progression with increased libido each year they age. Basically the female becomes horny and sex addicted for 20 years as they age.

Zbloutch

Getting covered in obscene tattoos

Space Waffle

Become a horny lesbian (sexual orientation change)

daisyck

Players body changes to a muscular thicc body type

Midnight68652

Hips and butt implants Gotta even her out a bit.

PhantomInks

every time the person ingests semen their body changes a little bit, if they get fucked in the ass their butt gets bigger, if they get fucked in the pussy their boobs grow a cup size, if they swallow the semen then there lips do get bigger but mainly their I.Q. takes a small dip. If for any reason she happens to orgasm while doing any of these then the effect is doubled in how much it changes. The physical changes are all natural and have an upper limit that once they are reached it will stop and just make them more horny. The physical changes for the breasts can get massive, and so can the butt, but the lips won't get too big, big enough to be dick sucking lips but thats it. As part of the the persons initial change the moderators of it say our favorite demons uncle or her herself could sub in a temporary one round guy to provide the semen. The person that has this change will have higher libido too.

SitriAbyss

Not a bad idea. But maybe there could be a little alteration with the sex part. Since they're all girls I doubt someone could just stuff the horny player, or willingly please her in some other way. So maybe a simple masturbation would be okay as well?

SitriAbyss

That could work. And how would Rachel act? I'm not sure yet in which direction her changes are heading. Bimbo? Stripper?

SitriAbyss

Good idea. It could be done as an overall lover body thickening.

SitriAbyss

Sure! How much IQ would they loose? I assume enough to notice it, but not that much they turn into idiots.

Seelenimplantat

An outfit change. The outfit would be that of a secretary, but depending on the player, the outfit varies. Rachel's outfit would be very revealing and that of jessica in amanda's body would be very milf/cougar like to attract the attention of her younger male colleagues. In addition, the status changes from student to secretary or doctor to secretary. Maybe with some new memories. :)

SitriAbyss

I like the age progression part, tho i'm not sure I want to see a gilf Jessica. But it can go for voting.

SitriAbyss

I'm not sure hip implants actually exist. But you can only change one body part at a time. So, which one would you see more? Hip or butt?

SitriAbyss

That's possible. But doesn't thicker means fatter? Wouldn't be athletic better? Just asking.

SitriAbyss

Not a bad idea, but i'm not sure it would work. I think it would be more fair if there would be a one time physical change, and not a multy level expansion and mental change chain. And the problem is that no men are around to actually give them semen, and no, I have other plans for the demon depending on the series ending. So can you please limit your idea for a single time TF please.

Bianca

Hmm maybe, if they get others to make them go over the edge, another thought I had as an alternate is they gain some piercings that vibrate instead of the can’t cum thing

PhantomInks

simple fix it could just be a male construct that appears if one of them demands cock, for instance say the dildo she uses she doesn't share and one of them are desperate enough to at least think heavily about begging for cock and a male construct appears only to fulfil the desire. You could maybe change it to one of the characters becomes addicted to semen, so badly that they beg for it out loud and poof there is the construct, and her semen addiction causes her boobs to balloon out because its a magical construct of Monkey Paw like origins. She may have got what she wanted but she payed for it with massive mommy milkers.

SitriAbyss

I think this is way too complicated for a single penalty. So what if the penalty gives a natural breast expansion but she must acquire it herself. A male construct appears and the player must give it a BJ. She refuses but the heat builds up so much that she jumps on his cock. And after some action he cums and by swallowing it makes her breast grow several cup sizes. How does this sound?

PhantomInks

I can definitely get on board with that but I would request that they grow huge natural tits, well past dd's

daisyck

Yes athletic is a much better one I meant like a curvy athletic body change

SitriAbyss

Okay, that's good to hear. But how big exactly? Because I might need to limit them somewhat because sometimes it's really hard to fit huge proportions in clothes, and keeping them for a long series like this would be a post work nightmare.

Kurt

It could be interesting, besides it's only a slight chance that she might age to a gilf. There's still several rounds left right? People can still make her into a milf again.

Zbloutch

Sorry, probably didn't chose the right word. I mean trashy, vulgar, the idea is that she looks like some kind of punk/junkie with these new tattoos covering her skin

Cory Hummel

For one round a player would get intensly horny enough to go out to get laid, only for later developments after being back to sound mind finding out that she is pregnant.

JRM

Just enough to put one in to average or a hair in below average (just to see how their reaction by having a lower cognition Amanda and Jessica more desperate to convince Rachel or Rachel doublingdown on what she wants to wish in the end or reconsidering? Just spit balling here)

PhantomInks

to be honest I would love them to be as big as the blond girls tits in that comic you had were a tall blond model picks on a short girl and they swap height and the blond gets huge tits and well the rest of her proportions are small either. But I'm assuming thats probably too big for you in terms of post work so I would say somewhere in between her huge boobs and that guy that you turned into a mega milf with big tits. Pretty sure her boobs were smaller than the blonds but still rather big. So if its okay something in between those two if the blonds boob size is too much

DB_Explorer

could go with genericlly slutty? Stripper/escort would be my choice

Anonymous

They all become the same age as each other the mom's body become younger and the other two grow older til they their age meets in the middle

SitriAbyss

I see. Well, if your idea wins I will see how big I can make them. But I think I can do something as you described :)

SitriAbyss

Well, the problem is that they're trapped in the apartment which floats in a different dimension. So they can't get out and come back.

SitriAbyss

The problem is that the penalties only affect a single player and not all 3 of them.

SitriAbyss

I see. Tattooes are more difficult than they look, but I think I can add a few.

Kuro7

The way you make them is just too sexy to not put forward.

Cory Hummel

Okay maybe a dildo that has special powers unbeknownst to the woman using it.

Cory Hummel

No matter what I love this storyline. Hoping that it keeps getting better.... Another idea would be that the moment the women they think they have everything figured out for a round their current personalities are amplified. The mother in the daughters body is full on pornstar, the daughter in the Milf Body goes full Milf wanting both her mom and friend. And the friend turns full stripper caring less about the mother daughter combo. But at the end of the round, only two of them have the effects subside as the other is more prominent. And for that a penalty of pregnancy too.

Zbloutch

In case you'd rather do something else, maybe one could suddenly find herself in a French maid outfit and start speaking with a strong French accent, you decide :)

Seelenimplantat

I would like to add something about the new memories. Suppose Amanda receives the penalty and gets new clothes and job. Then Jessica would get the new memories, since it is her body / life in the first place (at least for the moment hehe :)), and vice versa. I think it would make way more sense.

Amaz2k12

Hm, the Mum in the Daughters body will become a Bimbo Personality, the Asian on the other hand will become older (around 40) with the same sizes on breast and ass, a experienced older Stripper. The goth Daugther in Moms' body on the other side will gain Bimbo features more, but her mind will get sharper.

John

One grows a dick for a round.

Seelenimplantat

I think the idea is good, I am always in favor of age progression. I would like to make a suggestion. Instead of a simple age progression, why not use a Flash Forward instead. For example, Rachel ages 20 years. But her life has changed and continued in these years as well. For example, she is an experienced escort and has a lot of planned surgeries to improve her look to be more competitive against younger women. So she gets new memories. I want to highlight the reality warping effect a bit.

Dylan Derot

I think the super fake boobs

SitriAbyss

That already won in the last eound so it can't be submitted in this one.. But it can be added again in the 4th round. So, do you have another idea?

SitriAbyss

Okay. And will happen then? Because like this, she grows one and then later just lose it without doing anything with it.

Ora494

Mother Daughter Bonding: The player who lands on this square will be required to suckle Jessica's breasts. If Jessica lands on it, she will roll again to see who suckles her breasts (odd and evens.) The effect of the milk will make them accept each other as mother and daughter (even if they aren't), and they will now refer to each other such. Double would make the player repeat the act changing her into Jessica's genetic daughter.

SitriAbyss

I like all these things, but you can't suggest individual chanes for the players. You can just add a single penalty that will apply to the player who lands on it.

SitriAbyss

I like the overall idea, but I would leave the gentic part out. Jessica and Amanda are already related, but it would be kinda weird for Rachel, since she's 100% asian and a race change would be too much. So I think that they could refer to each other as mother and daughter, but in their mind they could still know the reality just can't say it out loud. How does that sound?

SitriAbyss

Getting pregnat from a dildo would be also weird in my opinion. But what if one of the players grows a male part and must impregnate one of the other players? Then loose it after that. Or keep it as a magical thing that can appear willingly any time.

SitriAbyss

Like a pussy piercing that vibrates and makes them horny? That could work.

SitriAbyss

I like the overall idea and it would make sense, but it would also make too many changes at once. So it's too complex for a single penalty.

SitriAbyss

Oh! That's also a great new suggestion. I like it :D

Zbloutch

Cool :) then I'll go for the French maid morph :)

SitriAbyss

Well, all these changes are possible, but all them together is a bit much for a single penalty. So I must ask you to choose between the clothes, profession or memory alterations. You will have plenty more opportunity to suggest the other ideas in a future round.

Bianca

Pussy and tits can’t leave out the tits lol

SitriAbyss

I still like the moral degeneration idea, but I think a changing so many things would be way too much even if it would make perfect sense. I rather approach it as the player just got the moral degeneration and from this point she acts like that. If that's okay with you. And don't worry if it makes things shorter. that I do a double update.

Seelenimplantat

Hmm tough choice. I think on their own these penalties are not very strong. So i want to propose something entirely different.......a nose job 😁.

SitriAbyss

So like a plastic surgery? How would it look different?

Seelenimplantat

Yeah like plastic surgery. You did something like a nose job in the Welcome to the USA comic on Page 64. It was of course magic based but the result is what i have in mind. A typical Instagram nose so to speak.

Cory Hummel

As a penalty for not playing a beer belly

Felixfalck

Honestly, if you could add a moral degeneration, and do two characters in one if one is less demanding in terms of rendering and so on Ill use my vote for moral degeneration, but if you can't guarantee that you'll be able to drop two chapters or two characters in the same chapter I feel like it would be rather lackluster. I do have another proposal that I was saving for next round if you'd rather hear that one. Alternatively: If moral degeneration wins you can make it so that the character whos supposed to land and get it, first refuses to play, gets penalized by whatever penalties are available, and then rolls into the moral degeneration. Or is that a bit of a stretch as well?

Cory Hummel

I'm for that as they are able to go back to being a woman from being a transgender

SitriAbyss

I can do that as a penalty, but they must play the game to recieve one. I can't really add a penalty for not participating.

SitriAbyss

She would be more like a Futanary. Having both genitals at the same time, but sure. So this should be your one and final idea suggestion?

FUNDMYLIFE

how about since rachel has the fake boobs and shit we continue down that line where she becomes a tansexual that way the sexual tension builds between her and jessica's mom in her body. of course a labido increase comes with it. and a totem or maybe a a minigame where if the person wins they get to swap a change they got with someone elses

SitriAbyss

To be honest, I didn't use much alterations, I just shrinked her nose a little. But I can do that if you want, no problem.

Seelenimplantat

Yep let's give it a try.....who knows how it turns out 😆👌

SitriAbyss

I'm not sure I follow your idea. So Rachel would turn into a guy? Or a totem that swaps a change with another player? In this case I remind you that such a penalty already is in the game under the black fields.

Willo

*A pint Glass appears in the room* Objective: Fill glass with freshly squeezed milk and drink it. If failed player loses 60 IQ. A Trial to either give up your dignity or your brains.

FUNDMYLIFE

basically rachel turns into a trap. and the totem would be based on a game as opposed to oh u got this totem. the totem is the prize instead of it being just here ya go.

SitriAbyss

It's not a bad idea, I actually like it. But the problem is that this game would be rigged against Amanda and Rachel. They don't have milk to fill the glass.

SitriAbyss

You can't suggest an idea that changes a specific player because anyone can land on any field. But someone already suggested an afro american TF. So do have another idea?

SitriAbyss

I'm not sure how this totem would work. But the trap could work as a penalty. Or would it be a Futa type? Getting a dick and keeping the female part as well?

SitriAbyss

So, do you want to alter your idea, or have another good one?

SitriAbyss

I think two penalty would be a bit much against the player. So I would say I go with the moral degeneration and try the double chapter. If that's okay with you.

SitriAbyss

Any other idea you would like to submit or change something on you current one?

SitriAbyss

These are again ideas meant for specific players. Can you write an idea that could change any player that lands on that penalty field the same way? Like for example, A hairstyle change. No matter who lands on this they get the same result. You understand?

John

Becomes really horny the whole time, and tries to resist the urge to masterbate. If she does masterbate it stays for the remainder of the game. Maybe tries to hide it and act like nothing happened, but the bulge is to big to hide.

John

A secondary request would be a girl gets really uncontrollably gassy and can't stop farting. Like a humiliation thing.

John

Sorry if i should stop, but a weight gain round would be cool. One girl gets really hungry and can't stop eating. But everything she eats increases her weight immediately.

Felixfalck

Sure. You're the boss. It may not even win, so no point in putting too much effort into it until then. Looking forward to it, what's next on your upload schedule?

WARLO

The player is now less worrying about her need to have clothes and The player clit get really sensitive.

SitriAbyss

A little weight gain could be fun. Would that work for your idea?

FUNDMYLIFE

so a totem would be like a reward so its less random so it could be a mini game within it could be a trivia game could be a race could be a riddle what ever the winner gets a totem that swaps a trait or change etc as opposed to just roll of the dice. and i mean like a trap a very feminine boy like a pre op trans person that passes kinda thing basically like what u had in the anyvesery with the man before the penis went away

WARLO

Yes, and without shame

SitriAbyss

Well, it's your idea, so technically youre the boss... hehe Up next is a new 10$ backer short comic, and probably the next part of Carnival of Nightmares. Maybe a Game Night chapter at the end of the month if I can make it, but that's just a big maybe.

BetheJohn

The player will be allowed to choose to swap anything from another player (entire bodies, body parts, personality, age, race, position on the board, etc.). Considering how Rachel is acting now an accidental swap could happen as well.

SitriAbyss

To be honest, there is already such a penalty that does something similar under the black field. And i'm not sure I can decide what to be swapped between characters. It would make a lot of people mad.

SitriAbyss

If your really want a totem type of revard or penalty, can you please come up with a simple one time totem effect that only applies for the owner of that totem. I think what you described complicates thing way too much for the readers, because I have no idea how could I do a fair unbiased competitions between players.

BetheJohn

That’s perfectly understandable, the other idea that I agreed with above was the athletic body type change if I were to change my idea.

SitriAbyss

The athletic body will go for voting for sure. So if you have a similar idea that you want to see voted on, feel free to submit it here :)

FUNDMYLIFE

it would be a one time use at least in how i thought of it. but yea the totem is one idea the trap is the other what u think about that one

Cole jones

Extreme goth transformation basically whoever gets this gets a more goth appearance like some leather clothes, piercing, and a bit of a personality shift too.

Ora494

Yes, that is fine. I just always try to account for something more extreme in the rare event it lands on double after it has already happened.

Ora494

You should probably stick with your original trap idea so it isn't so complicated. Just know that Rachel may not be the one to land on the penalty.

FUNDMYLIFE

yea i just said her as an example and since she is straight it allows romance to more easilly ensue

Alberich

Or Spanglish

Alberich

I hope someone consider a gain/lost/thieft height

SitriAbyss

Sadly not in this round, but it would be a fun penalty, that's for sure.

NO

Amazonian muscle gain and boob enlargement sounds dope