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I'm trying to wean myself off onomatopoeia. Took a great deal of willpower not to add a "THOOM".

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Frist

Woulda been totally warranted, but works nicely without it as well; they say less is more. Also, tee-hee, you said "ween".

Earthbound books

Genius idea for paneling layout Also I’m wondering if something has happens to the planet’s women? Just presupposing here, no malice intended but haven’t seen any yet and I’m wondering if it might be a plot point. 🤔

RaisedEyebrow

Sound effects are helpful (and sometimes fun), but combine the radioman's order to "brace, while showing jets of dust being flung free, really emphasizes that this is an impact you feel, not just hear.

McClaw

Really, though, how do you onomatopoeia a single pulse of pressure change? Maybe if there's enough echoing...

Eugenio Moore

STOMP! would be the correct one. And for some reason I find "Brace for footfall" funny. Don't know why, just do.

PixelThis

I love ground view of what the non-titan folks have to deal with

ElCid

Why? It's not like those are a bad thing, especially in, y'know, comics.

Paraffine

Your story-telling is amazing, how you convey "emotions" (or maybe "feeling for the scenery"?) with the pictures. I like that you use it for more serious things.

SeanSupreme

Honestly seems she’s being very careful, I’d imagine her foot coming down at full force would likely have enough power to shatter glass for quite a ways.