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So this is a story that I was commissioned to do.  Will be working on at least a part two, and maybe a part three if they're interested.  It's NSFW (mildly) but it's in the same vein as my other therinthropic shorts.

Hope folks enjoy.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C6VBqq4dbdYSh4k2pA7HDsQPmzBfD24LzJamFwxCSwQ/edit?usp=sharing

Feel free to leave comments.  Love comments.

Oh.  We'll be working on the next CHAPTER of homelands this Saturday.  Hope folks enjoy.

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NTG

- Story beings with a suffering horse who has to be put out of his misery. Insert obvious PH joke here. - At first it looked like a story that take place in “our world” which was reinforced by it namedropping the Marlboro company. So, I was caught off guard when the characters suddenly talked about magic and spells. - After three pages the reader knows that it takes place on an alternative Earth (Dallas, Marlboro) in modern times (guns, cars) where magic and monsters (vampires, sorcery) are just normal things (supposed death guy turns out be a vampire and joined a support group). The story does a pretty good job at introducing the reader to the setting within in a short amount of time. - Going to a nightclub in a setting with vampires? Bad idea! Has none of you watched Blade? Do vampire movies exit in this universe? Is Dracula this universe equivalent of The Birth of a Nation? So many questions. - Okay… the last part was… well… It explains the title of the story. Not sure if I want to read Part Two and Three, because I have a strong feeling the NSFW parts of this story aren’t going to be my cup of tea.