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A short story and some progress on homelands. (Patreon)

Published:
2021-11-21 16:36:49
Imported:
2026-06

Content

So first off I've been eager to get back to Scotch and her escapades in Roam.  Here's what I've got so far: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AW7dVhG5zPWBXdw3XvDWFvlelfRhz_0bFtnyOdmK1-4/edit?usp=sharing

And this is a transformation story that I was working on as a comission.  I finished it the other night.  It's SFW. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xXyP4hNHZQVOZM70_3Ahm-IT_pZFj9-rEOPRjDmgV_w/edit?usp=sharing

Otherwise thanks so much for supporting me and sticking with me.  Now that I've covered the tribes, I'm curious what folks would like for further lore?  The Legions?  Locations?  More rambley discussions of spirits?  Let me know.

Comments

DocSpit

If it's not too spoilery or whatever, little bios of the Magnificent 12 might be fun to read about. Who they were as foals and how they rose to the public eye as heroes.

NTG

Uhm, I think the link to the transformation story is missing. ^^ Didn’t expect a glance at the next chapter so soon. Always as welcome surprised. From the sounds of it Scotch and her friends had a lot of “fun” during the last few months. Locations sounds interesting. Especially the big cities Skylord mentioned: Iron Town, Barter Town and Bastion. Probably forgot one or two.

Nido76

Definitely all of it. I would love to know more about the locations, legions, and spirits. Just write down whatever and I'll eat it up lol. I do wish someone would make a proper map of Zebrinica. I would if I had the art skills and the patience.

Morgan E. Harvey

I agree with the above! I'm particularly most interested in spirits and legions. And if it's not TOO spoilery, maybe some information on the last caesar? I keep wanting more information about them. After reading current progress on FOE:HL 26-- You're really good at writing tense, battlefield situations. I don't know how else to put it. I'm curious to see how much being in Roam the past five months, and how they all have evolved and matured. And I can't lie, I'm curious to see if Scotch's civil engineering cutie mark will weirdly help them out of this one. Who knows? Maybe engineering past the block is a good idea hahaha. Will read the transformation bit later, as well. Love reading whatever you write.

NTG

Finished the transformation story. Interesting setting and main character. Very realistic portrayal of a young girl trying “to save the world” while ignore the advisees of her mentor and almost making a horrible mistake. It’s the privilege of the youth to make mistakes. Like the reveal about Abu Fakir at the end. The story didn’t outright told us but made it obvious to anyone who paid a little bit attention. Also explain his odd name. I’m not very familiar with Arabian names but Abu Fakir sounds like the stage name of a white guy dressing like an Arabian wizard. He probably gave himself that name after his “accident”. *** Also, there’s something about the new chapter, I only noticed now. Somewhere in Roam. Scotch Tape: “Hmm, why do I suddenly have this odd feeling that I’ve forgot something important? “ Somewhere on a road leading to Roam, several hundred miles away from Scotch. Rocky: “If she’s not back in two days, I’m going to censure her so badly, she’s going to s*** bricks! Literally!” A sentence or two to acknowledge that he either stayed behind with Charity or is still being carried around by Scotch would be nice. Just imagine that he has a really important scene in Chapter 28 but hasn’t been mentioned once since Chapter 23. That would be a bit awkward. ^^

Somber

I added a few to chapter 24.

NTG
>>72363731

Wasn’t aware of that. Thanks for pointing it out. 😊