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Hello twenty twenty... too. Homelands WIP. (Patreon)

Published:
2022-01-09 01:17:59
Imported:
2026-06

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So I'm back home and feeling a lot better.  My family's a lot.  The drive home was a mess with snow and ice, but I made it back safe and sound.  Slipped on some ice, got a concussion, and a sinus infection.... BUT!  I do have some homelands to share.  We'll have to see if this trend continues.  I hope people enjoy.  Thanks for sticking with me.

This is a work in progress.  We'll have to see how it goes...

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rWcbO31cIAruuFHItTbF3u9vo6ETOrNg5BL2VE7R2eI/edit?usp=sharing

Also, if you're a fan of Petricord, wish him a happy birthday!

Comments

NTG

You made it home safe and sound and then you injured yourself when you slipped on some ice? You really can’t catch a break, can you? Hope you’re feeling better now. - Scotch is basically the type of Fallout 4 player who instead of going around and shooting Synths and Raiders, spends all her time building and improving settlements. - Didn’t expect the Whiskey Express to be back just like that. If I understand this correctly, it’s now a different vehicle (firetruck instead of small tractor) but with the same steering wheel? And because the steering wheel was part of the previous Whiskey Express, it’s the same spirit? - Also, didn’t expect Vicious, Tchernobog and Lumi to already have catched up with Scotch. I must admit I’m looking forward to Scotch meeting Evil Blackjack again. - At this point I’ve honestly no idea how they’re going to reach the center of Roam. Funny how Scotch is so close to her goal yet still so far away. Making progress seems impossible and I’m really curious to see how Scotch will eventually succeed. My best guess is that it involves some sort of shaman spirt stuff that involves the Beast. Can’t have a huge monster and not have the protagonist interact with it at least once. ;) - So, we’re going to Bastion next. This should be interesting because I know I’m going to hate the place. XD But I’m also curious how Scotch is supposed to fix Bastion. That would require her to change the cultural identity and believes of the Propoli tribe. And they’ve been maintaining this messed-up system for thousands of years. - Small nitpick. Scotch compared the Beast to the Pony Statue in Manehattan. Sure it’s been several years since she left Stable 99 but has she ever been in Manehatten/ Friendship City?

Morgan E. Harvey
>>75313353

To be fair to somber, the group sailed through the bay with friendship city with thrush when they were transporting blackjack to tenpony tower to get her metal legs. Scotch tape was absolutely with them during that.

DocSpit

Always a good day when I see some Homelands!

Anonymous

> try to have a secret radio conversation > pick the most recognizable callsing ever Edit also a 6 month time skip is a lot i feel like the chapter barelly adress all the change between then & now also am i bad at english or is there an error around 'the bucket' ? i don't understand what the shop is selling and also i wonder how vicious is coping with her cancer ... even more parrallals with BJ?

NTG
>>75337512

I’m assuming The Bucket is another food stall/restaurant, where you get a bucket full stuff that’s slightly above the quality of Glory’s cooking and Stable 99's recycler lunch. Not great but it’s cheap and fills your stomach.

Morgan E. Harvey

What a month! I'm glad to hear you survived your family. Holidays can be pretty rough when your family is... you know. I had to pay for my siblings in-laws groceries because my father-in-law couldn't be bothered to give them any money while he ran off to arizona with his new beau. ugh. Thoughts on chapter so far- I LOVE seeing how scotch has grown and evolved as a shaman. She's learned a lot. I also like her getting to exercise her civil engineering skills with the fire academy. I think one of the best parts of HL is that we really get to see scotch grow and become her own person. (I think one of my favorite parts of your writing as a whole, actually, is that you're very good at character development.) It's also interesting to see the difference in how Scotch handles having a price on her head vs Blackjack. Blackjack is much more... berserker about things. Scotch is a lot more logic and caution-focused. Not to mention a bit more paranoid, though that's understandable. Curious to see how tcherno and vicious are going to come into play. Looking forwards to the rest of the chapter when you're able to finish it!