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Something I was working on today. Sorry... (Patreon)

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2016-12-10 01:30:49
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My brain was stuck on this for some dumb reason.  Hope it's interesting at least...

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Anonymous

Wow, I actually haven't read many non pony stories especially in FO:E territory. At least not as a main character. I am intrigued as to where this story would go, as well as the interesting setup you started.

Tetrakern

Hmmm. Can't say I'm thrilled for this, though it is interesting. It's just that I didn't like how donkeys were presented in the show, and I don't like it here either. That whole 'inferior race' thing for the sole purpose of ridicule. The real world is bad enough with this crap, no desire to let it invade my hobby space. Especially not if it is the main theme. Puts me in a bad mood. It is well written and paced, though.

C_II_R

I do think think the idea is interesting since getting a non-pony perspective has been something I have not actually read before. I wouldn't mind seeing how in particular the Wasteland is different for a non-pony; I do suppose the supposed 'inferior race' idea might weigh down the story too much in some way, but because I haven't been exposed to tales of persecution it's not easy for me to say how hard it is to write a story that is balanced while the prejudice presumably is ever-present. I would say that for Jennifer you've set up a good grounded situation that has her stuck trying to figure out how she can deal with things without giving up one or the other thing that she values so much.

The Lonely Sand Person

I really want to find out how much bullets are worth here, then go pay Jennifer's fee myself...

Somber

Thanks. It was just an idea, but I'm glad it's an interesting one. She meets up with a cyberpegasus from Horizons... one of Lighthooves' converts. She helps Jennifer, and Jennifer helps her come to terms with what she's lost. And then they save the wasteland from a SPP spread plague... cause I can never write a simple story.