Home Creators Posts Import Register Favorites Logout
haven't archived this post yet. have a subscription? use the importer!

Content

new day new date.... 

--

SO this scene was actually not gonna be a new scene but part of the last one, but i found it both 1) too long 2) not the right timing for what convo they had in the last scene, sometimes on stories i make some changes along the way so it fits better or the pace is not as rough, this was a sudden decision so if something seems off that is why T-T;;; i find this would be better for what they're about to do 8))) 

Files

Previews only

Comments

Andie

Omg what are they about to do?! 😳🙈

Kindra Morris

It definitely threw me for a loop! But no worries, i recovered! They are so not going to the movies ;)

Andie

Ahhhh love you loony!! 💕

tif

I was thinking the same question 🙃 Evan doesn't really seem like he was planning for a movie.

Aki Ai

Ooh I see. So popcorn, dark room, cuddled on the couch together. A scene from the movie come up and somone has some commentary then a slight convo. Next thing you you they are making out and getting hot and bothered. Now the real question is if they will make it to the bedroom or not. Alright I'm grabbing the wine, who wants some?

Nicolette

Actually, I think it works. The last page ended with Evan thinking that he would tell him that he liked him, eventually. So, transitioning to another day/date works. It can be viewed as the next date being “eventually”. Or however you want it to be. I think sometimes the pace gets broken up when we only get a page at a time. That’s why I like to go back a few pages to 1) remind myself of what’s going on or being talked about, and 2) get a feeling of the pace of the story to see where things left off. Plus the title helps too. 😉 Hope this helps give you some good feedback about your concern. 😊 Sorry it’s long 🤦🏻‍♀️

Lily

Been waiting for the update so glad it's here. I've got to agree with Evan I don't like romcoms either .

loonytwin

that actually helps SO so much, thanks for your feedback!! ngl i always reread my scenes to know if its a good place to start a new scene, its never easy but im happy to know people go back to reread old pages to feel the pacing, again thank you so much!

loonytwin

ndnjkenjkfjngjrkjng its so ffunny cus i consider eomc a badly written romcom with so many awkward moments msmdnfejnfnj

SkyeBoo13

This is to totally gonna be a Netflix and Chill moment! Evan seems thirsty 🤣🍆🤤

Valzan

Maybe Marcus' animal is going to come out...and by "animal" I mean "trouser snake."

tif

This is why I don't remember what the Underworld trilogy was about 🙃🤣

tif

I like how Marcus is actually being the pure one this time 🤣🤣😁😁

peachpety

bold evan boutta Show Up and i’m so here for it...and for the rare and hella sexy marcus blushes that will result. as always, loves. 💕

Red

Evan. Naughty, naughty 😏

Valen Luxx

Aaaaaaa I can’t wait to see what they’re going to do x3

Faline C

Looking at the scenes after this I’m so glad you decided to make it a next date.

Alex (ksn)

love the change, it fit beautifully... we gonna get more then a movie Evan... i think we are... hehehe <3