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 Here's a little piece I wrote last week that was just a little outside  my usual wheelhouse, but I think did a good job capturing the intended  Feels. A lot of my stories focus around someone who is the fortunate  recipient of unearned affection, but this one instead revolves around a  young man who's earned it, but... well, you can read the story. I  suppose I should include tags so those of you who are a bit more  particular don't wind up feeling betrayed, but I don't want to spoil since a lot of it comes out in reveals towards the end of the story. I've included a spoilers.txt for those of you who'd rather risk wrecking surprises than waste time on something you wouldn't enjoy.

Comments

Khellrendros

Not my cup of tea, but still well done.

WDB

Riveting stuff, but, yeah... kind of not so much "erotic" as "terrifying". Still! A really good, tense-as-hell read.

Soulsorrow

Yeah not really a fan of the cuckolding type of story. But keep up the good work.

Simon Shaw

You're gonna have to write something more upbeat to even this out. This poor fuck

icebear

Nice to see such a reaction. I knew I was operating a bit outside my usual sphere, but I still kinda liked that it made me feel something. Something dark and horrible, sure, but I'm a DM, too. Making things dark and horrible sometimes is part of my other job. :)

IS

I am still coming back to this. Dark but really well put together!! I thought that it would be great Ice Bear if you would consider writing how this all happened but from the perspective of Casey, Clarissa and Cara. That could work!

Alex

I generally liked the story but it can be improved if you make The Mind Controller the cause of Casey's parent's divorce. It just feels like a plothole; it doesn't make sense to have a single mother rent a room out to a creepy middle-aged man instead of a woman or student. Also, if the dad left for another woman, it doesn't explain his absence from his kids' lives - unless you explain it away. Maybe the dad and Clayton were rivals at work?