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Commission: Sub Notes (A TIOS Story) (Patreon)

Published:
2019-02-25 05:59:00
Edited:
2020-09-19 15:30:58
Imported:
2026-06

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So this was a wild and different kind of experience. Some people I know basically only read fan fic these days, but it's not a genre I've ever really gotten into. Then lo and behold, along comes someone to request some. Ergo, here you have Sub Notes, set in the This Is Our Story universe, writing fan fic for my own fic. :D

There wasn't a satisfactory way to make it part of the canon without mussing up some story details that pertain to the main series, but it's still a fun little aside with potential for expansion. It focuses around Jordan and some interactions with an authoritative substitute teacher named Miss Galvin who foolishly decides to give him a detention. Tsk, tsk. Shenanigans ensue. :)

Enjoy!

Comments

Cae_sar

I wouldn't mind a side novel of just highschool shenanigans that could have hapenned but didn't, specially since you have said you do enjoy sprinkling some HS clichés here and there, Kind of feel bad this character can't be incorporated to the canon, I do feel a bit bad for her. Its interesting seing, in this oblivious & compliant world, people being so direct and agressive towards an edited person, or rather a persons edit. Something that is usually reserved to Jordan and in a softer way, from Connor. Even Kristen who is far more mean spirited is trapped in her own cliché. This was certainly more fun than I expected for a story that actually has quite a simple premise and is so direct with the bullying aspect.

ukyo_rulz

I'm pretty happy to see our favorite villain Jordan spreading his wings here. I've always felt like he could have done more with the opportunity he had. A nice add-on, even if it's not to be considered a part of the mainline story.

WDB

Man, I remember finishing TIOS 1 and feeling so emotionally invested in Connor's story that the idea of Jordan as a villain was nerve-wracking. Things were finally working out for Connor and now it was all at risk! Cut to months later, and I was *psyched* to see what new depravity Jordan would get up to when this story posted. An excellent addition to the TIOSverse!