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So I'm back in the realm of getting to write my own fan fic! This time around in revisionist histories, we get back to our core cast and focus on none other than Kristiana Coszic-Lewandoski, a.k.a. Miss C. After whetting his appetite for teacher flesh on the sub Miss Galvin in the previous installment, he moves on up to his fellow full-time faculty member. So without further ado, enjoy!

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ukyo_rulz

I thought this was pretty good as a story judged on its own merits, but I had mixed feelings about it as a part of TIOS. I really like Jordan's development in these side-stories. I used to dislike him as a character. He was such a boring, one-note guy and his lines, thoughts and motivations always made my eyes roll. These additional stories emphasized his talent for thinking tactically and that made all the difference for me. It’s a tiny bit of character development but it makes him seem less like a cartoony villain and more like a believable character. This is a dude who is really good at figuring out how to get the things he wants, and really bad at figuring out what he wants. Nowadays I think of him as one of the more interesting characters in the story. As for Kristy, her actions here reminded me too much of Conner, whom I think of as the least believable character in the series. Their previously established competency makes it less believable that they would make mistakes needed to move the story along. Kristy had always been portrayed as a smart cookie. The mature adult in a story full of silly teenagers. I’m left asking myself if she would really act this way in these situations, or if it’s a bit of contrived stupidity necessary to move the story along.

icebear

I agree with a lot of the things you said, though I won't get into dissecting my characters until I'm done with 'em. :) But I should clarify to make sure that these stories are NOT officially part of the TIOS story line, just some What-If games to play. In the main book, Jordan never quite goes for the older ("older," but to a teenager late 20's feels pretty old) gals. At least, that we've seen thus far - not to give anything away. :D

Hugh Michelsen

I really liked it. Showing Jordan be extremely clever with how he got what he wanted was great.

Hugh Michelsen

It did of course leave me wanting more. Can you finish the last TIOS already? Kidding of course :) The best comes to those who wait.

Imperialistic Falcon

I loved it. Jordan pushes the limits, takes more risks and manipulates more aggressively. It's much more exciting! Now that I've gone through all the side stories, Connor seems tame, boring and pedestrian in comparison. Here's hoping he becomes a little more aware of what's happening around him and develops a spine in tios 3! The rumour blocking commands Jordan uses are a stroke of genius. I remember when Connor first realised and whoever he asked about Jordan just starting yawning hahah.

J

I think Miss C is the best character you've made in all your stories. Looking forward to more of her in the future :D Also to add, I used to see your Todd stories at mcstories and that got me interested, but the way you wrote TIOS, especially Miss C just made me really want to be a patreon. Keep up the good work and looking forward to your other works as well

Ferrum1

Very good tale. I'm a fan of TIOS since it hits all the right buttons. How this is going to jive with the main storyline, though, leaves me baffled. How was our villain able to get access that should be only available to the Editor-in-Chief? How has nobody noticed the huge changes going on in the other girls at the school? What has our nemesis done in the overall sense to change people's perception at the school so these things are kosher. Ms. C is definitely my favorite character and I like seeing her get changed. The unintended consequences are the really hot part, so I'm curious how her new outlook is rippling outwards. All this goes back, though, to how our dear Editor seems blind to the changes. Did I miss some installments somewhere? Is there more of the TIOS main story not already published online?

Greenstar

Is there a projected 3OS completion date? Not tryna rush, it’s just that this TIOS universe and accompanying fan fic is by far the best MC Erotica universe I’ve read since I first got into these types of stories. Your work is like art, and I thank you for the joy and excitement you bring to us with your words