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AnOtherWorld (Patreon)

Published:
2020-04-10 02:35:55
Imported:
2026-06
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Here we have the much-belated February commission. The basic premise involves a young man who gets a virtual reality video game and gets more than he bargained for. Since I was working so much on Gamemaster's Screen at the time, which those of you who've picked up a copy know is full of VR shenanigans, I decided to wait until I was done to tackle this so I didn't get brain bleed and could fully divorce myself from one concept while I wrote the other. I had a huge amount of fun with this one, and I hope you all do, too!

I hope you're all staying safe and healthy and weathering all this nightmare fuel like the champs you are. Be well everybody! More to come.

Comments

Sagesse

Thanks! That was enjoyable. Short and sweet, even. :)

WDB

That was great! Very sexy and mildly disturbing, an intriguing combo. Hope you're doing well!

J

I had to chuckle at the "Can't blame a guy for trying" part. Really enjoyed this short and sweet story. And I like how the two featured women had a semblance of an actual personality without tunnel-visioning on sex (Much like most of the characters in TIOS). Great job!

Ferrum1

Very "Master PC" ish. Not bad, and I had to go back to re-read certain sections to make sure I was following things, but overall an okay tale. It had enough to it that I wouldn't mind seeing a second, third and fourth chapter to help flesh things out a bit.

ukyo_rulz

Nice little story. The most interesting aspect of it for me was Noah's seemingly repressed feelings of attraction towards his sister. He clearly seemed to recognize her as being an attractive person but it seemed like he was trying to purposefully deny this. It was interesting that he made her avatar a nudist who craved his approval, and remove the familial relationship, but he couldn't take that last step and make her his girl even in the game. His resolve crumbled pretty quickly once he was actually put into a sexually charged situation with her but I guess it was... too hard (heh). It may have been a convenience for the story that the parentals went away after Noah messed around with reality but I was actually interested in seeing how a meeting between Noah, Kylie and their parents would play out. Like, would the parents no longer remember that they had a daughter? Would Kylie no longer recognize them as her parents? If not, who does she think her parents are? I guess the parents were removed by the program because, to make Kylie a renter to Noah, he would have to actually own the house. If he's living with his parents then the parents would be the landlords instead. So I guess they're living elsewhere? Or did the game kill them off to have Noah inherit the house? As for the game experience as described in the story, it's a little weird that Noah just nodded off after queueing up a nudist Kylie and a Beth obsessed with his dick. That might be the least realistic aspect of the story actually. No wait, the least realistic aspect of it is actually the idea that anyone would play the sims for any reason other than coming up with creative torture scenarios for sims to live out. ^_^

Kacoo

Saw this on EMCSA and had to come here an say how much I liked it. thx dude.