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We're getting close, ladies and gents. The story is officially in finals week, and this installment takes us up to pre-dawn Wednesday. Not that it has to end with the school year, or with graduation (and I'm honestly not sure it will at present), but with the story in a mode of Canon trying to decide what he wants his new post-Serenex normal to look like, he's enough of a literary dude to want to sync his life transitions with his career. I am super appreciative of all the thoughts and energy you folks have been putting into this, by the way! I am responding to fewer comments presently just because it's coming up on the end and I don't want to say anything that will hint at endings or prejudice the way people read it. I do really love that's there are teams forming for the girls, though. I certainly have that war going on in my head, and obviously Canon has a much more intense and personal version of it in his. 

Unrelated, I mentioned I was going to get a discord going, and I haven't forgotten. I'm throwing together a separate post on that to give folks a chance for guidance, requests, advice, etc. on that score, so if you have anything to say about it, scroll on up. Or down. However y'all's feed organizes stuff. Input welcome!

More to come, though, so don't despair! And then more to come after that. Happy Friday!

Comments

Will Orlando

“Referring to the sanctioned contents of your lock, obviously.” think you meant to say locker? Sad chapter for team Taylor. Hope its not the last we see of her.

Gadfly

I haven’t ever commented before because I pretty much lurk on everything. Gotta day, though, I think you’ve done a great job with the story start to now. Also, though, on a sad level I was 100% team Taylor and actively dislike Tabitha, which has made it harder and harder to keep reading. Which is weird because usually I enjoy unlikable characters as much as likable ones, but I guess there’s a difference when it comes to erotica.

WDB

"spending lazy days fishing at Bear Lake" Whoa whoa whoa. *Bear Lake* is local to the kids at GHS? What... what other high schools are in this district?!

Irregular Apocalypse

I gotta say, I don't remember bristling so much at a line of fiction like I just did at "I’m worth losing your sad little life for.” Taylor is a despicable character (and yes, I know there have been hints of something _more_ going on under the surface, but still.) Please understand that it's only meant as the highest praise for the writer that I love hating her. Can't wait for the next one.

Dan Chevrie

Taylor hates the man he isn’t

M.

Am I crazy, or does this feel like it’s windowing down to a conclusion? I’m going to be VERY sad when it ends.

WDB

I'm also a Taylor fan, which made me *thrilled* with the end of this chapter. I loved her getting to forcefully argue for what she's owed. ("What are we owed," indeed!) Canon's still processing what he wants, and I don't expect the life of devotion Tabitha's promising is where his heart is, so it's nice to have Taylor so clear and insistent. These two characters... epic, you know? This is a relationship that's endlessly entertaining.

WDB

Loved this chapter. Loved how dramatic and *raw* the argument scene was with Taylor and Canon. Loved any single paragraph devoted to Candy and Isa's sex life. Loved that Cassie intro. Loved finding out that Taylor can make Tabitha (and god knows who else) do what whatever she tells them. Just... this story! I love it!

WDB

Alright, since Ice Bear brought up the various Teams that are forming, let's find out how much support these ladies actually have (*joke about Taylor's top in Chapter 25 goes here*) by voting! It's the month for it in the US, anyway! I made a poll at https://strawpoll.com/zgbc4p654. Super unscientific, but it's what I've got for now. Go Team Taylor!

J

I thought I'd drop by and noticed that You're 1 patron away from 500 (at least when I checked) Ice Bear. WOOOOO

cuzimhavingagoodtime

Jeez, scariest thing was Canon not grading Taylor's work. That's so unprofessional! You have a commitment to your students Canon!

InCompleteController

The post: First of all, this part came out unexpectedly fast and made me wonder why you even felt the need to apologize for the delay on part 24, knowing that part 25 was on the way. As I always say, I hope this story doesn’t end with the end of the year. I feel like there’s enough stuff going on in the background to keep the story rolling, but it also feels like you have written yourself a bit into a corner. The Story: Wise words from Cassie, what a pleasant surprise. Although, true to her nature, there were a lot of semi related tangents wrapped around it. The scene with Louisa and Candace was also nice. Again, with the story being from Canon’s perspective it can be difficult to see many of the indirect effects of the Serenex. It’s good to see them exploring the idea of adjusting some of those side effects, especially with the low amount of Serenex that is currently available. Then there’s Tabitha. For a moment I thought she had begun playing with Canon’s emotions in an effort to imitate some of Taylor’s traits. At least we got to see how effortlessly she can pull it off if she ever needs to. As for Taylor herself … Look, I’ve given many girls points for being able to read Canon like an open book, but Taylor just seems wholly unable to read the situation. If she had cornered him in the parking lot, she would have been pinned down on the hood of his car. Yet for some reason she chose his office. Look, I know it would be a power move to completely disregard the schools rules, but I would have thought that it would have involved pre-dozing any potential witnesses with Serenex before. I just don’t see how Taylor expected Canon to burn all bridges instead of settling with the next best thing, that being 5 other girls (maybe 6 with Abbie). Finally there’s the hidden commands for Tabitha. I knew something like that would be in place, although I suspected it would have gotten brought up in a more dramatic moment. Thoughts and theories: I still feel like more student have been dozed than we are aware off and it might have been revealed in a dramatic moment, like Canon forgetting the time whilst making out with Taylor during recess. There’s still the feeling that the Sterns have something planned, so it might come up there. There’s also Canon’s missing ability to make Taylor do what he wants, although reluctantly. However, I got the feeling that the Stern’s took away the memory of that when Canon got dozed the second time. I wonder just how south things can go with Taylor on the warpath. There’s clearly some hidden commands in the people they have dozed, Tabitha being the obvious example. Louisa clearly has some hidden commands as well, because I don’t see how on earth she would have let Taylor walk right into Canon’s office in an outfit like that. It seemed like all she could do was watch out Horen and give them all a warning.

esclavage

This particular chapter made me go back and start rereading the very first chapter. I'm actually beginning to wonder a few things... 1) Starting at chapter 15, I think the compulsion on Canon - "I am not a pussy" is no longer there. Taylor very clearly tried to be provoke him with that exact language and it didn't trigger anything. I now want to go back and reread starting from this point to see if this is true. So it seems that this compulsion has been removed from him, which also implies Canon has been doing everything from Chapters 15 onward of his own free will and choice. By the way, I am amused that Canon is still trying to bury the hatchet with Isa & Candy. I can see why he makes someone like Taylor lose her mind because if the Serenex compulsion ever does wear off, Isa is going to bury a literal hatchet in his skull. 2) Taylor has some interesting word choice here in this chapter. I've always found it an interesting narratively that Abbie seemed to be the central antagonist instead of Taylor since the core of the story revolves around Canon and Taylor's relationship. In fact, it always felt odd to me that the younger sister had the older sister so pacified. But I am now convinced that "my little sister is the boss of me" is a lie; it's not real. I suspected it in Chapter 24 when Abbie seems reluctant to use this command; it doesn't jive with all the other things we saw how meek Taylor was to Abbie prior. And going back earlier, Taylor's quite evasive about said command when Canon is sympathetic to her in Chapter 9. The story doesn't add up at all; Taylor states Abbie can't be too bad to her because their parents would suspect something - but when Canon shows up to the Stern household, the Dad is Serenex'ed. I then realized that we've never seen Taylor writing out all these things; we are looking at only Canon's POV. So my current conspiracy theory is that Taylor isn't under any real compulsion and is actually willingly going along with everything.

Ferrum1

Sometimes I wonder if it's gaslighting, I just can't keep track of things, or IB has forgotten who has what and did what. The idea that the one of the Stern sisters, whichever that was, could think of themselves as Canon's "fantasy slut" and then act like they do... just never jived with me. No girl would think that "fantasy slut" included such hateful, vindictive, crude behavior towards the guy they were supposed to be a fantasy slut for. It just doesn't align with anything that's in the common conscience when we think of what a fantasy slut is. When we look at the other girls in the mix, they all seem to be acting like their roles are commonly described. A 'booty call', for instance, isn't a girlfriend and shouldn't act like one or try to become one. Tabitha is doing the "teacher's pet" persona pretty accurately, even going so far as to try and read into what Canon really wants -- the submissive, obedient, eager to learn sex toy. She's cooperative and pliant, because that's what her role seems to be when you think about it. The Stern sisters, though, are horrible by every metric. There's nothing about them that fulfills the role of the fantasy slut except for how they might dress and their willingness to bed Canon. Even then, though, it's always on their terms, and at a very high cost -- none of which falls into the fantasy slut category. I think that failure on their part is why I could never get into them as characters. Second to that is the lack of apparent Serenex use on people outside of the core group. I've been waiting and waiting and waiting, but nothing happens and I just cannot fathom someone like the Stern sisters not using the Serenex to set up their own little fiefdom. Contrary to the story, high school girls are not stupid, and anyone like the Sterns would see the benefit of dosing the principal, other teachers, cops, etc. They dosed their parents so they'd let them do whatever they wanted, but not the principal? How does that make sense? She turns the SRO into a "submissive little bitch", but doesn't put in a command to always obey her? Or did she do that... and we just haven't been told about it? She gets revenge on them for forcing her to eat out her sister, but that revenge stops at simply making their relationship a little kinkier? Now, all of that is not to say that I didn't like the story. I always have troubles with any story that has a cast of more than 6, especially if there's a ton of stuff I have to attribute to each character - like a list of rules they have to follow. If there's one thing I'd really like to see, it'd be a series of follow-up stories much like we saw in TIOS. There's so much that has been left unsaid as we followed Canon on his adventure, and it'd be nice to see what's going on with the other characters in the story. So far, everything has been about Canon's story arc, but we know almost nothing about how the other girls were treated, especially after the Stern sister got her hooks into them. This was highlighted here when Tabitha had to write her new mantra at the end. I was left wondering if here initial indoctrination included a code phrase that would cause any more commands written out 100x to sink in just like happens when under the Serenex initially. I don't know if that would be possible, but I could see it being possible, and I could see it being something the Sterns would do. Those two are not going to give up control of folks, imo. They might be train wrecks, but they aren't stupid train wrecks. The idea that they'd not implant a command to obey them is ridiculous, imo. I could very easily see them implanting the code that if the target was ever commanded to write something out 100x, it would be accepted as fact - like their brains were on stand-by the whole time, just waiting for a new command. In TIOS, the hottest parts were the side stories, imo, because they showed something of what was really going on, and I'd love to see more "behind the scenes" for THAL. I have this image in my mind that the Sterns dosed all of the core girls and had them show up at the Isa's house. They all got dosed again, swore fealty to the Sterns, made a porno for the internet in some huge lesbian orgy, etc. Everything we've been seeing in Canon's arc is mostly subterfuge to keep him happy because they have to (serene commands), but the real story is the empire the Sterns have been setting up. Again, I'm reminded of TIOS and the sex ed class. Is it too much to hope that we'll see more along those lines? Is it wrong to want to know how Cassie and her mother are getting along? What kind of guidance has Cassie's mom given her to help her become a good booty call for Canon? What kind of exercises has she had to do every night before bed just so she'll be ready if Canon calls her? Candy and Isa are surely having some interesting experiences, as alluded to here. Will we ever get to see what their home life was like after the Sterns dosed them a second time? So much to think about. I'm sad that things are coming to an end with this one, leaving so much unsaid. Let's hope that there's more to come.

Jordan del

Freakin fantastic. That scene at the end with Taylor has to honestly be one of the sexiest non sex scenes I’ve ever read. I know the story is ending but you’ve been wrapping it up so well i can’t wait to see the final product

Ice Bear

I begin to think that the same thrill my former students got in correcting my writing mistakes is also experienced by my readership :D

Ice Bear

Man, there is no sneaking anything past you. :)

Ice Bear

I saw! I'd say something like "hey, be sure to tell your friends" but maybe this is a weird thing to evangelize to one's friends about :)

Ice Bear

As a technicality, Canon's power over Taylor came when he had her do the hundred copies of "Mr. Canon can do anything he wants to me," which is not the same as "I will do whatever Mr. Canon wants."

Ice Bear

Eeeek! I never mean to gaslight people. Hoodwink and mislead for suspense purposes, yes, but don't doubt your sanity. In terms of the "fantasy slut" dissonance, maybe there's some amount of interpretation involved. The way Abbie's brain interpreted it, in all her vanity and sociopathy, is that being his fantasy slut was interpreted as "I am a slut that Mr. Canon fantasizes about" instead of "I must become the sort of slut he fantasizes about." There's probably also some extent to which her understanding of fantasy differs from his (and ours, as fans of mc erotica). Though yeah, she really does push it pretty damn far sometimes. I am sure there is ample room to explore/criticize which Serenex utterances become hard literal truths and which become filtered through the individual's consciousness, but just so you know I'm not trying to break your brain, that's sort of where I have Abbie at. I try not to get too involved in readers' character dissections, because readers should decide how they feel for themselves, but I never mean to make somebody have that ucky gaslighty feeling.

Ferrum1

IB, that's an excellent way of looking at it, and one I hadn't considered. It would make sense, too, considering her over-the-top narcissistic personality. Of course, that mentality also would support my idea that Abbie did far more to their victims than you've let on. She might be somewhat protective of her sister, but the rest of the Serenex crew would be in some big trouble. The question, really, is what kind of orders would a sociopath like Abby give? With her rather curious dislike for lesbians (for shame!) and police, dare I hope that there's a side story on the way that details what happened between her, Candy, and Isa? While she might not want to get involved herself since she detests lezzing out, I can certainly see her forcing Isa to be a whore for Candy, and for Candy to enjoy pimping Isa out. Maybe that's what they were alluding to in this chapter when they were so hesitant to talk about their sex life and how it was impacting them. As revenge goes, that'd be a pretty powerful example! Maybe I need to commission that story!! :D

WDB

I wonder if Taylor's high regard for herself is rampant narcissism... or a cover for some deep self-loathing? I don't know. She's got some stuff going on underneath, like you said!

WDB

The Taylor ultimatum (which sounds like a spy thriller) is... yeah, it's not a smart move from her. It is asking someone who's furious at you to blow up their life as a testament to your self-worth. It's crazy! But, like, Taylor is *spinning*. She is so desperate to win Canon back that she is willing to burn everything else down if it leaves the two of them standing. She doesn't... I don't know if she understands emotions that aren't *apocalyptic*, you know? She's someone who physically assaulted Canon in the first chapter because she couldn't understand her feelings for him. Her asking him to obliterate his life for her, it's idiotic. It's horrifying. But it's probably exactly how Taylor thinks about love.

WDB

"Starting at chapter 15, I think the compulsion on Canon - 'I am not a pussy' is no longer there. Taylor very clearly tried to be provoke him with that exact language and it didn't trigger anything." I mean, you *could* make the argument that Canon opting not to buckle under Taylor's no-doubt intensely erotic demands *is* Canon not being a pussy? Him standing up for himself?

WDB

It's so good. I felt like blowing up my own life after that pitch from Taylor! She's making some really great points! In that top!

J

I'm heavily invested in the Tabitha line because she seemed to be the most (relatively) "normal" of them all. That ending just might be the most devious act Taylor has done to Canon, albeit indirectly, at least in my mind.

InCompleteController

["Mr. Canon can do anything he wants to me," which is not the same as "I will do whatever Mr. Canon wants."] Right, with that wording there’s not much control over her, besides her passive acceptance. I was just remembering Canon mulling over what buttons each girl had in part 18 and that he trailed off when it came to Taylor. I took it as him not remembering what he made her write, due to everyone else’s button being Serenex related, but it could just as easily be that Canon was genuinely unsure. [But, like, Taylor is *spinning*. She is so desperate to win Canon back that she is willing to burn everything else down if it leaves the two of them standing.] Yeah, I didn’t take into consideration how much Canon means to Taylor, despite how often I’ve stated that Canon’s love for her make him act irrationally. I still think her move was a bit too *apocalyptic* but I can see how the logic works out in a strange “We both burned our connection to GHS in order to be together” kind of way. I just find it somewhat ironic that the Stern’s could have made sex at school a reality, if only they had been smarter about dozing the faculty and their fellow students. Also it’s rather awful for Taylor to seemingly lose to the girl, whom was brought to the harem as part of a prank.

InCompleteController

1) I doubt that the trigger is gone. It’s just that Taylor and Canon feel differently about what being a pussy means. There’s a difference between being too cautious and taking unnecessary risks. Canon follows the first definition, whilst Taylor uses the second. It feels even more unnecessary considering Tabitha’s presence, a girl who’s so well behaved that it will not raise any suspicion that she’s in his office. 2) I still think Abbie is the boss. Sure Abbie went a little overboard with Taylor, but you have to remember the circumstances of when it happened. Abbie was afraid that Taylor would prevent her from being Canon’s fantasy slut. The reason that Abbie doesn’t abuse her power over Taylor, as far as I’m aware of, is because Taylor is only forced to physically comply with her demands. Taylor does not like to be told what to do and will likely be vocal about it days after the fact, so Abbie is likely just limiting herself to when it’s necessary, which still feels like a violation to Taylor.

Paddy

Come on man don’t leave me hanging like that!! Morreeeeeee

InCompleteController

[The Stern sisters, though, are horrible by every metric. There's nothing about them that fulfills the role of the fantasy slut except for how they might dress and their willingness to bed Canon. Even then, though, it's always on their terms, and at a very high cost -- none of which falls into the fantasy slut category.] It feels like you are mixing the Sterns a bit. Taylor is the girl with the least Serenex induced compulsions, and she didn’t have the nicest personality to begin with. Abbie on the other hand is deeply into the thought of being Canon’s fantasy slut. The issue with Abbie seems to stem from how she and Canon interprets what being a fantasy slut means. Tabitha very much tries to fulfill Canon’s vision, whereas Abbie follows her own. The rationale likely being that Abbie believes more about that stuff than Canon. Honestly, Abbie hasn’t been very mean to Canon. The worst I can think off was the egging, which was a poor way to deliver a message to Canon, and the blowjob with Justin, which also brought an extra girl to the fold. Not to mention that Abbie has been very relaxed about not getting much attention. Taylor is the one that’s going around and causing trouble at the moment, not Abbie, the fantasy slut. [She turns the SRO into a "submissive little bitch", but doesn't put in a command to always obey her? Or did she do that... and we just haven't been told about it? She gets revenge on them for forcing her to eat out her sister, but that revenge stops at simply making their relationship a little kinkier?] Also, nothing says that Louisa doesn’t have to obey the Sterns. Honestly, I doubt that Taylor would have been allowed into Canon’s office again if that wasn’t the case. The lack of revenge is again due to Canon, whom just wanted to pacify Louisa and Candace. Enjoying their current state of being was mentioned as a way to do that, so that’s what the Sterns did. Not to mention how easily they can be incorporated in fantasies from now on. [I could very easily see them implanting the code that if the target was ever commanded to write something out 100x, it would be accepted as fact - like their brains were on stand-by the whole time, just waiting for a new command.] It’s kinda that way for some of the characters already, often much simpler than what you suggest. Tabitha initially thought that she already had Canon’s approval in class, so there was no reason for her to change her behavior. However, it didn’t take long for her to realize that she was a part of Canon’s harem and that he might not approve of her in that regard. As a result she is quickly becoming Canon’s perfect slut to the point where she finds it difficult to differentiate between who she is and who she thinks Canon wants her to be. Were also shown that Tabitha has to comply with everything Taylor, and likely Abbie, says. It was even difficult for her to find excuses for not letting her writing remain on the board. Abbie’s control over Taylor is very different in that regard, since Abbie is only Taylor’s boss, which gives Taylor a lot of wiggle room to voice her complaints. However, she still has to comply with Abbie’s demands.

esclavage

"I gotta say, I don't remember bristling so much at a line of fiction like I just did at 'I’m worth losing your sad little life for.' " An interesting point and also great callbacks by Ice Bear in his writing of the chapter. Going back to Chapter 9, Taylor reveals the two things she wants from a guy. 1) "I want to be worshipped like a goddess." and 2) "To be fucked by a god". -> with this statement in view, Taylor's dialogue makes complete sense. She calls Canon a "worthy partner" (a god) and it's why she's fixated on Canon's statement when he says she's "the best sex he's ever had". (goddess #1 status). She also notes what makes him different from every single other guy out there that has also fantasized about her -> Canon actually went and took what he wanted (the Serenex & everything that followed was *for* the purpose of obtaining Taylor). Again, goddess status for her - since Canon is willing to spend his life savings and risk his reputation as a teacher to have her. And for what? To "correct" her behavior and have her pass his class? That's already been exposed as sophistry by Canon himself. He's had other students equally as poorly behaved as Taylor but never gone so far for them like he has for her. He wanted her and wanted to fuck her. So what she wanted from Canon in the confrontation in Chapter 25 is a reaffirmation of this. She wanted him to take what he wanted (Taylor) at the expense of everything else (his job, his relationships, etc). After all, if she's his goddess, she has to be the most important thing in his life, correct? I feel like is kind of her test - I also feel like the essay she wrote him (how did she smuggle those in her shorts anyways?) is a kind of confession to her own feelings. Honestly, the fact that nothing happens post this act leads me to believe that the essay is a confession/lover's suicide/goodbye note - it's ultimately a negative thing.

Ferrum1

ICC, there's no doubt that I'm confusing the Stern sisters. I always have a problem with characters once we get over 4, and the problem is compounded when I have to remember a list of rules/commands/behaviors for each of them. The Stern sisters weren't sufficiently separated in my mind, and the hateful behavior from them really didn't inspire me to pay attention to them. Generally, as soon as one of them pops into the story.... I'm more than happy to work the scroll button just so I can get past them. It's a testament to IB's writing skills that he can make characters so distasteful! My point about the latent 'trigger' installed by the Sterns wasn't that they have to obey her, but that there's something about writing a command 100x that makes the commands stick in the same way they do when under the Serenex. I agree that there'd obviously have to be a command to obey the Stern sisters, otherwise Isa would have kept the girl out of the classroom in the last chapter. However, we don't know the details because that's never been really shown. We knew one sister had to obey the other because of those "she's the boss of me" comments, but how far does that go? What have the Stern sisters done to Isa, Candy, Cassie and Tabitha outside of what's been shown in the story? That's the part that really gets my imagination firing. The sisters were miffed about being forced to muff dive, so they brought in Justin to give Canon a taste of his own medicine. But they also dislike Isa and Candy for the same event, which doubles down on the other dislike they have for them because they're teachers/cops/authority figures/etc. I can very easily imagine the Sterns going full tilt on Candy and Isa with some wicked commands! Now, maybe it's just my imagination firing on all cylinders, but I could easily think of a few commands that would give the Sterns that sweet taste of revenge, affirm their power over the lesbians, and create the basis for a whole new story. IB won't go that route, I'm sure, but it's fun to imagine it! I like Cassie and Tabitha. I even like Cassie's mom and the dynamic those two share as they try to fulfill their respective roles.

HardhatDoozer

His denial of her irresistible pull is manifested in his artificially giving her zeros when he acknowledges that she’s done the work and should pass (his course/as his inseparable goddess). No wonder he can’t sleep. He did completely the wrong think. Abby said as much to him in the last chapter.

HardhatDoozer

That apocalyptic view of Taylor’s is strangely “Romeo and Juliette” in nature. She believes in Mr Canon and her so intensely that she’s willing to release extreme destructive chaos. He is trying to understand her in a slow calm way. It clearly doesn’t fit the situation. His subconscious is trying to bring him around to Team Taylor, but it is clearly an uphill battle for his emotions to trump his rational behaviour to that extent. Surely Tabitha can’t compete with that for long.

InCompleteController

[My point about the latent 'trigger' installed by the Sterns wasn't that they have to obey her, but that there's something about writing a command 100x that makes the commands stick in the same way they do when under the Serenex.] That could very much already be the case, just look at how dedicated Tabitha were to her task. The main difference between the tasks and their programming is their duration. “Write 100 lines” can only take so much time whereas “seek Canon’s approval” is an ongoing process. What would happen if Tabitha was commanded to “never speak to me again”? I honestly think she would do it. The thing with the Serenex is that they all have some wiggle room when interpreting what was meant rather than what was said. Tabitha was commanded to shut up, which might have lasted forever if she didn’t interpret it as meaning never to speak again whilst Taylor was still there. We don’t know if the command simply ran out or if Tabitha simply thought she had completed the task. The thing about Louisa and Candace is that the lesbian scene was very much Canon’s idea and it was only Abbie that participated. So it could easily be filed away under it being Canon’s fantasy and therefor be okay with it. The sisters even did their own slightly lesbian stuff during the interrogation of Cassie, but again it seemed very much like it was Canon’s fantasy. So Abbie isn’t complaining because she’s fulfilling Canon’s fantasies, and Taylor isn’t complaining either because of Canon being forceful and taking what is rightfully his. Taylor seem to have a thing for guys taking her right there and then, despite her own protests. The only thing I could see leading to revenge was Louisa tasering Taylor. But who is to say that they haven’t gotten revenge for that, with the commands implanted as well as making her the submissive one. Also, as you point out, their style of revenge seem to be in the form of pranks, like having Justin give Canon a blowjob. Making Louisa that submissive might be their revenge. Who knows?

ukyo_rulz

I ran out of good things to say about this a while back so I'll just keep saying that it's still good.