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I was about to say something about how I wrote a nice short chapter for you, but then I realized it was still 7000 words. So... another mid-sized chapter? I don't even know. Apply your own adjectives. 

Loving all the ideas and discussion, btw. As many of you have said, though, Patreon is pretty weak for these communications, so I'll be getting on that discord issue pretty soon and hopefully we'll have a place to share ideas and theories and (if I ever do something wrong, I suppose) criticisms. Since a few folks have brought it up, let me assure you I will NOT be leaving patreon, nor changing my posting habits here. For those of you who just want to download a story and read the thing, it will still be here to let you do just that. (For those of you who don't want to be funky fresh discord dudes/dudesses, you can still comment here!) But it'll be nice to have something more interactive, and that doesn't force an app shutdown half the time I try to load your comments on my phone.

Also also, because it is super fun and I await statistically significant input before I make final decisions (but not really), WDB made a survey to poll who's rooting for which candidate. If nothing else, I am tickled to see a poll completely detached from modern politics. Yay for polls about which woman/girl is the best sex partner! Check it out.

 In the meantime, here's another chapter! More to come.

Comments

Ferrum1

I had to pick only one "team", so I went with Cassie because she seems the least manipulative and 'innocent'. Tabitha isn't bad, and Megan, Candy and Isa all get honorable mention, for sure. I'd have voted for them all to one degree or another. The Stern sisters, though? Not a snowball's chance. PS: A cannon? Talk about an ugly way to brand yourself. It's like taking a crayon to the Mona Lisa! Total yuck. PPS: I guess I was wrong about the command code sinking in at the end of the last chapter. That's good because I like Tabitha, but I was hoping it would generate a little heat/conflict.

ukyo_rulz

Team Abbie till I die, yo!

Will Orlando

Another chapter of Tabitha getting her way and Cannon not refusing her. Feels like he is the one following orders now haha

ZeroCross

I am a bit saddened about the cannon. I expected something else, maybe a "Teacher's pet" with an apple or something. The cannon is a bit too trashy, I think, for Tabitha. I'm also surprised that they didn't discuss other orders Taylor gave. I would expect Mr. C to be worried and investigate deeper.

WDB

I love how almost every dude in an Ice Bear story doesn't seem to get pop culture. It's adorable, how square they all are.

WDB

This was a super-solid chapter that's both payoff for Team Tabitha as she gets screwed, and an excruciating turn of the screw for us Team Taylor fans. Like, I *knew* Canon would have to look at her essay at some point, and I dug the casual steps to get it into his hands, but HOW DARE the author leave that as a cliffhanger. D- chapter, huge concerns about work ethic, please apply yourself more in the future.

WDB

She's incredibly goal-oriented!

InCompleteController

The post: Ice bear with his “Oh no, I’m late” back in part 24, only for him to release 2 parts in a week. Sure, it’s shorter but it’s still long enough to establish and explore a good scene. Queue the “it’s not about the length, but how it’s used” comments. As for the survey, no justice for Justin! Whilst I acknowledge that thematically the story should end with Taylor as the main girl, I can’t help but feel that Tabitha would work better. Still each girl adds there own flavor to the story and it’s how they mix (or not) that makes the story what it is. The Story: The double meaning of the intro was good, the reminiscent of the school year was decent. It’s always nice to get some extra background info, but without having been a part of it, it looses some of its impact. Then we have Tabitha, the little manipulative bastard! I love that she wants to have her own memory of sex during school and is manipulative enough to know how to get it. Was the thing about Candace’s programming papers a lie? As far as I remember, Canon forgot his writing stuff at the coffee shop and just had them repeat the phrase over and over again in their heads. Something that he was unsure of if it would work. Not that it changes anything in the story, it could easily have been a little white lie to not reveal just how much Tabitha knows and how much research she has done. EDIT: Never mind, I misunderstood what papers she was talking about. As for the tattoo itself. I’m not the biggest fan, but who is to say that it’s actually permanent. If anything it would fit Tabitha to go with something temporary first, just in case Canon doesn’t like it. It’s very bold to doing a student during break like that, given the events of the past few days. But Tabitha seemed prepared and found was of taking precautions. The scene itself was good. Nothing spectacular, but pressed all the right buttons. It really showed just how good she is at playing with Canon’s needs and ego. I do love how Canon almost got exposed though, as well as the quick comeback he made. I’m not surprised that Canon thinks about the future and that he doesn’t need the Sterns. One major issue with that vision is that Abbie is his little fantasy slut, and she will become a major disaster if she doesn’t get to fulfill that role. If it wasn’t for the theme of the story I could envision a future without Taylor, but not without Abbie. Thoughts and theories: All in all, this was a good little filler part. Nothing spectacular, it went over a few little details and provided yet another hot scene to the story. Don’t be ashamed to have more of these now and again. It was nice seeing Tabitha being so manipulative, and I hope it gets to ramp up. Why wouldn’t it? She has the drive to be little miss perfect, so why not stop when there’s no one else trying to stop her? Which there certainly will be. It may just be my corrupt little heart. But once Canon almost got caught, I half expected comments that revealed that the other students were influenced as well. Just small things like: “Hey John! You owe me 10 bucks. I told you he would do it!” All in all it feels odd seeing how the story seems to go towards a conclusion. Hopefully it’s just the end of a chapter, or book I really. I’ve said it plenty of time, but I will say it again. I always envisioned the story as an ongoing thing, with the girls being the source of the chaos and Canon trying to keep everything under control and a secret, all whilst failing to resist his urges every once in a while.

WDB

How insane would it be if this *is* just the end of a book, and the sequel is Canon accidentally turning his new crop of seniors into sex slaves? Just him completely baffled by how it's all happening to him again? Full slapstick comedy? I'd be up for that.

InCompleteController

I would be furious! Why skip the summer vacation? In all seriousness. Year 2 could involve Abbie becoming part of Canon's class, which would open the story up for all the dirty scenarios I have talked about. "3 months!? I'm impressed C-Dawg! Hannah thought it would take you at least 4 months to realize that everyone in class would do literally anything for you."

WDB

Here’s something I was thinking about today, as I was thinking about “Teaching Her A Lesson”. (Also, hi, I think about these stories randomly throughout the day.) We were talking about what Taylor and Tabitha symbolize, a few days ago. I said that I thought Tabitha represented Comfort, and Taylor represented Challenge. But, like, I don’t think that’s entirely it? I think they both represent something more specific. I think Tabitha represents Ice Bear’s teaching career, and Taylor represents his writing career. Tabitha is all the reliability of a teaching career. She’s predictable, routine. Her goals are transparent, her metrics for success cleanly delineated. She’s still someone that requires work, but that work is always rewarded in the obvious way. She isn’t a challenge, because she only requires from Canon what he’s already prepared to do. She’s an application of his skills, not a test of his imagination. Taylor is a constant struggle. With Taylor, you can argue and fight and get nothing, while other times she just shows up and gives you what you want with almost no effort. Being with her, you can maybe try juggling a few other girls, but sooner or later you’re going to have to give her all of your focus or quit her entirely. Taylor’s a writing career that offers no guarantees, but could be worth risking everything for. Am I the only one seeing this? Am I reading too much into this story? It wouldn’t be the first time! (I'm going to cross-post this to the Discord, see how the engagement varies.)

WDB

And that's why there were only 26 chapters of THAL, kids.

skinnyrandompatron

What is it with this Taylor "represents" anything despite her own person? :D

Ice Bear

Mr. Canon has some excellent lectures prepared on symbolism. ;)