The RA, Ch. 11-12 (Patreon)

All right, gang! We have the final two chapters here of volume 1 of The RA. There are a handful of areas where I'm not sure I love the execution, so don't be surprised if in the final copy I've done some substantial revisions. The meat of it is there, though. If you have particular thoughts, feel free to share. (Or if you love it as is and think I'm a once-in-a-generation erotica wunderkind, say that instead!) I broke it up into two chapters once I realized how big it had gotten, and what a convenient break point there was.

With so many commissions on my plate at the moment (yay!) I'll be taking my time editing this bit by bit instead of all at once like I usually do with large works like this. I'm thinking I'd like to add a floor plan and a roster, too, since folks who don't have access to The RA Notes and the (updated) photo collage of Higgins Hotties still have a relatively easy time of keeping tabs on the sprawling cast. While we wind up with a smaller group with more defined personalities, it's a lot of names and traits to track.

I hope you enjoy, and more to come! Happy Monday.