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AND! SO! WE CONTINUE!

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Patreon/Kofi: Bench Warmer Chapter 31

Somehow, after what had happened today, I felt that spending my time face down in bed was not what I should be doing. Somehow, after what had happened today, I found it challenging to care. I'd just spent the last hour doing the next best thing to screaming.

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John

All I heard at the end was... trololo.

Alulim Eridug

>"Kabuto's backers weren't the sort anyone wanted paying attention to—not even a little." The phrasing here is a little awkward, since you would never say "[I] wanted paying attention to [Kabuto's backers]", and the grammatical structure should be preserved through the phrase movement. It might be better to say "Kabuto's backers weren't the sort anyone wanted the attention of—not even a little," though I can see a couple of other ways it could be changed. Or you could just leave it as-is, it's not as if it's a huge issue.

Alulim Eridug

Also, good chapter. I imagine that Sakura's continuing to cement her reputation as the eerily smart one.