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HERE IT IS! SORRY FOR THE WAIT, AS USUAL, BUT HERE IT IS!

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Patreon: School is Canceled - Dead Outside

Takagi Saya was a genius. That statement was not in doubt. She was a genius. A genius among geniuses. The one percent of the one percent. Anything she put her mind to understanding might as well have been an open book...or it should have. It really should have.

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Darik29’s Writing Corner

Yang is right. Literally no sense of priorities what so ever. At least that one creepy asshole might get his dick punched in if he tries what he did in canon.

Blackmarch

No thoughts? Where are the thoughts!? Give me thoughts!

kalistira

So I'm enjoying this one, for sure. I think it just feels short though? The Saya POV serves well in giving some perspective, but it also left the Yang portion feeling really short. Personally, this would be a story that I would let a few chapters come out before I really started reading. It feels like it would be wetll served by the extra word count, and opportunity for everyone to get their initial, 'zomg wtf is this blonde bombshell' moments squared away, since it feels like everyone would have that, (not to say I don't want to read those, because with Yangmarch, the outside perspectives offer plenty of giggles, and necessary perspective that is not lacking, but can help me see what's going on with Yangmarch occasionally spazzy narration.