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HERE IT IS! FINALLY! AHHHHHH!

This was harder than it should have been! But that's true of all writing, isn't it!? Seriously though. This chapter is more intense than the others. Fair warning, even if its just for a little bit.

Tell me what you think!

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Jaune wasn't quite sure when he snapped back to lucidity, pulling himself back from the brink of sleep; Back into cold, hard reality and yet another traumatic experience. Not traumatic for him, surprisingly, but still traumatic... Those tended to be the best days, the ones where everyone but him go...

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crazyone

I liked it. The intense tag is not a lie, and it is about time they called her on her bullshit. Jaune looking like he might get some development of the character type, rather than exclusively the musculature type, is good. Blake being horny in the background is good. Very strong chapter all around. Thank you very much.

MPotato

Hrn, intense tag is true, but it feels like (to me) like the 'yang is selfish' got thrown out by Weiss to cover 'Weiss grabbed Yang's Xiao-Long and didn't give more than the canned apology' but if 'yang' acknowledges the issue then it is a valid one. Thank you for the chapter..

Blackmarch

Jesus that's a lot of likes. 21 likes? Wow. This is my most popular chapter yet!