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THE STORY CONTINUES. AND I HEAR ITS GOOD. BUT, OF COURSE, I COULD HANDLE HEARING THAT IT IS BAD AS WELL. AND WHY THAT IS THE CASE FOR BOTH THINGS.

CRITIQUE IS IMPORTANT.

ENJOY.

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Patreon: Bench Warmer 6

There were a lot of fences that needed painting in Konoha. A lot. Many. A great deal, even. Multitudes. Plenty. It was a thought that came to me as I found myself standing in front of one of those fences. The ninth this week. Unpainted.

Comments

MadGreenSon

What are the dubious but amusing benefits of bloodletting?

Dominic Jones

really nice, the emotions at the end were well done

The Eldritch Knight

You my friend can really bring out the emotions in your writing. That was good.

Nabnabnab

As was already stated in other comments, good job with the emotions! The new Naruto-Sakura-Sasuke is a joy to watch unfold. The only criticism I have would be "no following chapter yet?", more seriously, please keep writing at a pace that keep you sane and healthy!

Blackmarch

Do you guys think this chapter stacks up with the rest? Be honest!

crazyone

I find this chapter to be very excellent but also it was being edited as I read it so I might need a second look.