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To tell me what you think of the new chapter!

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Arthur

Finally finished it. I'm intrigued, but not sure why Sakura is thinking of clans here.

Nicholas Roberts

My lucky day! I just found this story today and joined the Patreon, only to find a shiny new update waiting for me! I'll be totally honest about the chapter, I thought it was really well done... but I've never seen Naruto except for the first 3 or 4 episodes. I don't understand the references to Akimichi jutsu or the reference to the demon horns. I think I'm just getting to the part of the story where it might be necessary for me to watch the source material to understand what's going on.

AbyssalApsu .

i think the most interesting part is the seeming detail about how inner showcases yin-femininity in frame inside thier mind implying the yang-masculinity to be what we have seen so far which combined with both the physique we have seen from sakura and the knowledge we now have concerning them trading places leads to the idea that the akimichi techniques are allowing body forming from mind and that the inner who is to be in control next is liable to make sakura more feminine in appearance in comparison

Tom

Are you conceptualizing the Haruno's lack of outer Genjutsu ability as inverted, and acting as a some sort of spring weight on an internal hammer for extra willpower? EG, canon Sakura against Ino, Outer Sakura caught Ino, Inner Sakura acted as a hammer to dislodge her. Interesting takes on the body image contrasts. I wonder if it will come off like a "chameleon" bloodline to uninformed observers? I am also curious if you were intending for Sakura to setup Sannin comparisons. She can heal, ala Tsunade, She is Brutal in execution and a lil MadSciency! like Orichamaru, and she emulates some of Jaiyra's fighting styles in a memorable fashion.