Out of Time: Forgotten Quest (Patreon)

(2 and a half rewrite chapters)
I wanna rewrite it I wanna rewrite it...

This was my Isekai and my third attempt at writing, I wrote some 29 chapters of it and got extremely frustrated with how much I didn't know and dropped it. This story's original version suffered horrifically from bad narrative promise.

Originally, I wrote over a dozen lighthearted chapters before planning on moving the story towards a horror twist, but didn't achieve that very well because most  people weren't expecting it. I actually remember one particular review that mentioned it was a story with the "monsters are people" trope, which was actually the opposite of what I was doing, but they quit reading 2 chapters before the twist.

This time I'm going to try writing it with a much darker tone from the beginning, starting off with a near death experience in a cave full of monsters.

This story is meant to set up a few other stories I plan to write, including Monster Buffet and a time regression story I have planned called Premonition.