Unranked and stuff (Patreon)

Added some scenes throughout act 1 with flashbacks and extended other scenes, worked on showing more of rain's thoughts.

Also, I want to scream to all of you readers: There was a deleted scene that connected the A plot and B plot. I was wondering why everyone thought the B plot was so strange.

The reason Xavier visits Rain to walk Hooty isn't to walk Hooty, but to assess whether Rain is Awakened or whatever weird shit he has going on. There is a lost scene where he meets with Willow after, connecting the two scenes together and showing that Willow isn't actually naive enough to think there isn't something strange going on with her brother, she is just respecting his space and thinks he needs time to adjust to how much the world has changed. That missing makes the b plot under contextualized. Im screaming. 

Did you guys ever see that scene? did I post it anywhere? Its even in my notes attached to the scene where its supposed to happen but missing.