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Collared: A Mind Deviancy Story (Patreon)

Published:
2020-12-30 13:58:37
Imported:
2026-06
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Elliot’s life is in shambles when he stumbles across Evelyn’s path.  His  wife cheats on him, his daughter thinks he’s a loser, and his son  barely acknowledges him any more.  Naturally, in the Shop of Lost  Things, Evelyn finds the exact item Elliot needs to get control of his  household once more.

Fair Warning: This one goes off the rails a bit toward the end.

Comments

Red Panda Seven

Thanks for the epub set for 2020. Re-reading these now that I can easily read them all on my phone and flip thru the pages; I know it is your style to leave the stories open at the end but this one feels like I should be expecting a second chapter or an ending scene. Knowing Evelyn told gave the collar to get his house in order; I'm just left with the character wondering if his new collar works outside of his house too. With the rest of the stories I'm left with a good picture of where the story was going when you finished them and this is the first that I'm wanting that extra page/scene and it might be the setup to me at least feels like it demands resolution in making the wife's lover submit or transform into another bitch in heat for the house. As the Hot Plate occasionally is updated with story progress but not often and there doesn't seem to have been a lot of change in the past couple of months, I am wondering is there going to be more tying them together or are the Mind Deviancy (Evelyn) and Bimbo (Thaddeus ) stand alone snippets unlike your longer form Crimson stories? or is there hope for follow ups or accidental overlap?

quixerotic

You've hit quite close to the mark on several accounts. First, the end of Collared doesn't fully resolve because I pulled back a little on the direction it was heading. It seemed like I was doing too much with the cuckhold, ince*t, animal tf, multi-dick, and mind control all piled together. Moreover, I didn't give the cast enough time to develop/cope with all that change. Second, I originally planned for the collar to return to the shop at the end of the story, brought back by one of the other Deviancies. I held off on this part because I wasn't sure how long it was going to take and didn't want to bog down the back half of the story with exposition that wouldn't see any payoff. With those two points in mind, I can forsee Collared getting a "version two". I even held off on putting it elsewhere than here for that reason. Third, yes, the Deviancies will have crossover. Evelyn will be visited by one of older Deviancies in a story soon, and cross paths with Thaddeus in the future.

Red Panda Seven

Personally I like the direction of where it was heading as the Deviancies seem to be fun stories with interesting consequences. I wouldn't mind seeing this develop out but I understand where you're coming from. Making a pack around an Alpha seems like a great direction for it with all the fallout that comes with it. I'll patiently wait for more when you get back around to it.