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Elizabeth recounts the events which set her on a path to confrontation with Greg. When her daughters return home, she must adjust her expectations of life as the twins spurn her plans, her husband confesses to more than an affair, and life threatens to spiral away.
Due to some external factors, this took a while to get to a break point despite it being relatively short in length. The POV shifts over to Elizabeth for this section to give a better idea of how she views the world and how often it refuses to cooperate with that view. I waffled a bit on the last section. I wanted to get in a sex scene for Elizabeth that flows as part of the story rather than just randomly stopping for some spice. Particularly after the tease at the start when she gets interrupted at the club. I may need to lean a little more into the way she rationalizes this behavior.
I think I'll have another Oddlock "one-shot" tomorrow. It's a holiday week so that's causing some problems. Also, in a flamboyant display of my usual horrid luck, I had a tooth break so getting that fixed involves a round of antibiotics which never helps swing the mood in favor of writing spicy story. Anywho, happy reading!