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Hey Peaches! It's day 3 and we're still in Sevilla. After a nice breakfast in an alley we head out of town to some Roman ruins that were in Game of Thrones. And then we head back into the city to see the largest wooden sculpture in the world. Finally Jay does some shopping on Daigon Alley.

Please let us know your thoughts about this rough cut. What you want more of, or less? What needs more context? Do you want more graphics? If so where? Your input is a massive help as we craft this into it's final form!

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tRavel'd Day 3 Rough cut Reaction

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9lz

"That's what she quacked" 🤣

fivefingers_through_fire

I loved that we got so much more commentary and reaction to the actual locations you visited this day. Seems like that’s just how the dice fell, but having those bits really jived a bit more for me.

9lz

I give this one 1/1 good haircuts on Jay

Joey (Hustlemando)

Ok you can’t leave us hangin about them eggs 🫠, cuz that was not a dozen lol. Did you guys ever ask how many?

Danny Stagraven

This is usually not my kind of content, but I’m really enjoying watching you guys, and almost more so, I’m enjoying watching you guys work it out in the reactions. Jay’s seriousness in his assessment, note taking, and brainstorming is literally a joy to watch, as someone who enjoys the process of creation. Don’t know that that is helpful for the vlogs, but just wanted to say that! Keep doing what you’re doing guys!

Chaos Owner

Thanks for this insight into the process. I feel that if the final product isn't divided by each day, then there has to be a narrative purpose for each "episode" such as Modern architecture in an unexpected city or searching for a dragon's nest. Also, the puzzle of how many eggs leads me to a scene of you guys interacting with the locals that hasn't been shown up to this point. I'm curious about the throughlines of how this experience was different from your preconceived expectations either with the environment or with your travel companion

Drakoni

These keep getting better! Hurray for putting in the actual backpack photos \o/ This episode is way denser on content and so far had imo the best blend of looking at travel things and your bits around it. Really like you putting in the alternate view in the colosseum with that wide shot of Jay, the flashback to the bus running, agree you can do that a lot more. Honestly, I'm starting to think you shouldn't go for 1 day an episode. Because if you want them to have similar length you'll either drag out days with less content, or cut a lot on days with more. I wouldn't mind Day 3 to be cut in 2, have Day 1 and parts of Day 2 together tho, focus more on your expectations and arrival. So making each episode more about the content than time. Also think it might not hurt to use snippets from here as teasers in episode 1, as things to come. I could imagine you in the studio summarising some of the things you saw, with the snippet either on top or in the usual react spot, just to get everyone more into what to expect. Maybe I missed it, did you talk about the actual building year of that wood sculpture? Or put it somewhere? I really like that you got a calm thoughtful moment up there. Slow down, see where you are. Within all the fun and bits, which is still the main focus. But giving room to some more serious moments when they happened. Think you got just the right mix in this one.

Bladefire

When Michael is asking a question off-screen, I recommend using a different color text so it stands out more. If that's not feasible, maybe a drop-shadow?

Shauna

I admit: seeing "Naboo" was awesome, but perhaps some convo on what it really is, when it was built etc. I think my favourite part was the bench watching the ducks with the convo between Real Jay and Imaginary Adam. Also....yeah, when talking of sexy Gargoyles, we really need the insert of Demona and Eliza when she was turned into one----oh yeah. and of course Goliath.