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So, proper update time.

The story for March is complete, I will start posting it in a day or two, due to the nature of it and how long it ended up being this is going to be another multi-part affair.

I really bit off more than I could chew this time, I thought I had a really good idea for it but it turned out to be far more work than I had anticipated, and I still had to cut on some of the scenes I'd wanted to do in order to not take even longer to complete.

I fear that I'm really going to have to aim for simpler concepts if I'm going to keep this as something that I can feasibly continue doing while also having enough time for my own projects.

I'm not laying the blame on any of you for what you have suggested, it's the combination of my overambition and poor work ethic that causes the problems more often than not.

So I ask for this round that you consider suggestions more for "scenes" than broad stories, setups that mostly revolve around "thing happens" rather than any extended sequential plot progression.

Da Rules:

-Only one prompt per person.

-Please keep your prompt simple, about three sentences at most, wiggle room is preferred.

-I reserve the right to strike something down before the voting phase and ask for a different prompt if I don't think it would be amenable to me; I will like your reply if I approve of the idea.

-These are not requests, I'm looking for ideas that I can work with based on my own interpretation; if I pick your prompt that doesn't mean you have authority to demand that it go in a particular way.

-No personal OCs (you may suggest Non's OCs if desired).

-You may also suggest prompts from my idea dump doc if they are tagged as "short form". (Maybe not all of these are actually short enough given the present circumstances, idk)

The suggestion period will be open for two days, so closing on April 6 at approximately 6 PM EST.

Comments

Shocker Blocker

THE AUTHORITIES HAVE ISSUED A PUBLIC BIMBOFICATION ALERT. YOU ARE ADVISED TO SEEK SHELTER AND AVOID CONTACT. (You're free to interpret it however, but I like the idea the alert itself becoming a bimboified vector by the end. Very Local 58.)

KaijuKing1990

Chrysalis self-bimbofication, please.

UntakenUsername12345

Blessed and Endowed Sunburst (busty boy sunburst sequel) Sunburst: Hey Trixie/Starlight, we got a letter from the...'Blessings of Epona Society'? Trixie: Oh, Trixie knows! The BES is a special club, only the most beautiful/curvy creatures on Equus are allowed in. Sunburst: And they are inviting...ME?! Trixie: *Great and Powerful Shock* Starlight: Uhm, congratulations?

UntakenUsername12345

Oh no, some text conversion shenanigans happened EDIT: Alright, so Patreon can't handle quotations marks for some reason

Non

Well, I think it could work, but I suppose I should ask, what exactly are you expecting from this? What I'm imagining is them looking at...some catalog, I guess, featuring some of the club's members. This would include Celestia and Luna, which would tie back to Royal Radiance. More of a showcase than directly showing Sunburst meeting with this group.

UntakenUsername12345

It was intended that the invite is to a meeting (maybe his initiation into the club) or functions as a pass of sorts and he visits the club because he’s just curious. I was thinking of this story being more ‘fun’ so to speak than the prequel. Sunburst has accepted who he is, but he is about to be the only stallion in the club and his unique condition the topic of conversation. So our shy nerd boy has his work cut out for him and who knows what kind of (growth) shenanigans this all-female club has when they meet up. Since you wanted a scene rather than plot progression and I had to keep the prompt short, I couldn’t include that much exposition. Although, maybe I could try to rewrite some of the sentences to make my intention clearer. Trixie was supposed to react shocked because she though the invite was for her, which is why she knew about the club in the first place, but I see now that I missed including that. (And Trixie’s jealousy/frustration at being jibbed could maybe be used to make her an antagonistic force)

Non

Mmm, that's a bit much for what I imagined, especially given there are presumably going to be quite a few characters at whatever club scene this takes place in. Again I feel like having this be an introduction to this club group would be feasible, actually doing much at the club would make things a lot more complicated. I think it would have to mostly be a matter of Sunburst meeting some of these mares who proceed to fawn over him and maybe Trixie and (reluctantly) Starlight try to crash the party.

Non

The suggestion period is now over.