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heyyyy!! new comic DROPPED >:^D a lot more dialogue now, i looooove creating drama dialogues heheh i feel like this is a kind of a continuation of my other comic "not the same as when we were kids", but it wasnt intentional xD 

only more and more alicia gets max away from her... 

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Panerkraft

Awww Iike character development but I always feel bad for the characters when they fight

Thraximore

Very good character development! One small bit of feedback: on page 2 panel 1, Al says "fall for my enchants" which is awkward phrasing. Wouldn't it be "fall for my charms"? (Unless it's a play on the word Enchanté or something similar.)

realle

thank you very much! 💚 oh this definitely sounds way better! i have a bit of trouble with English, since it's not my first language, so minor mistakes happens sometime.