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FULL CHAPTER HERE —> AGAINST MY WILL 25

“Hey, Fury!”Goddamnit. Too many curses flooded his thoughts but that one stood out the loudest and proudest as one fist clenched tight at Fury’s side. Goddamnit. The other gripped even harder around the barrel of his automatic rifle as he let out another quick burst toward some open hangar doors. God motherfucking damnit.Because nothing could just be simple.He wasn’t asking for easy.No, it was a fucking alien invasion; where would the ‘easy’ part of that even be?All Nick Fury wanted was something simple.But no— that was asking too much.Because of all the people in all the places on this entire whole goddamn planet, it just had to be him. What kind of godforsaken shit did I pull in a past life… Fury’s teeth grit tight again and tried to hold back a well-deserved scream. To deserve this bullshit?And that was an honest question.Unfortunately, there was no answer as Nick narrowed a single eye up at the giant green lightning bug above the military base, the kid’s fist glowing brighter than all the rest of him.Twenty-four hours ago, that boy had hovered right outside Fury’s office with enough power on that middle finger to turn the Triskelion into a pile of green-colored ruble across half the Upper Bay; a promise on those lips that if SHIELD ever went down, he’d be there to shake the last few trickles out to put out the ashes.With a fifth of SHIELD’s black ops dead and nearly a fifth of SHIELD’s total numbers burned in that same nuclear fire, it was looking like the exact worst day for him to cash in that particular promise.

The kid came down out of the sky just to stop about sixty feet up and hang there. Green light glared off him hard enough to wipe out even the idea of a shadow beneath him, arms crossed with an alien fleet above him as he put out enough of that light to make every radar operator from NORAD to Mexico — at least the ones that weren’t currently panicking — even more confused.

"Remember that whole thing about pissing on the ashes?" Those boots glowed as he dropped over a dozen feet further, sixty becoming forty-five as a platform of green formed under both his feet.  "Let's hold off on that one."

FULL CHAPTER HERE —> AGAINST MY WILL 25

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Against My Will 25

He didn't even grunt as tape came off his arm, the triple-layered adhesive ripping off some hair with it. The cannula was pulled quick, the white-coat not even bothering to press down after as a bead of red came out of his elbow and trailed down onto his cot. ...what now?

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Tape Man

I still don’t like how he can’t fly, that’s like power Ring 101. It just makes him look like an off brand lantern, not even a good one at that

DivineDrawings96

~Fury is in trouble~ ~Fury is in trouble~ And something tells me that he’s not going to be popular after this is over right? Curious when in the comics does this take place? Like issue? Chapter?

Poops

Honest question. Did you read the chapter?

Tape Man

Yeah, he isn’t flying, he’s using platforms to give the appearance of flight. But he can’t fly without one. So did you read?

zfighter18

He’s using a platform to brace and launch off. He makes it when he wants additional stability

Tape Man

He shouldn’t need to. He’s a lantern they free fly all the time. They don’t need launch points. Pretty much every lantern we see in media is always hovering not needing platforms for take off. My main gripe is that I don’t like how you dumbed down the ring to this degree. The whole appeal of a lantern Ring is that it can create what you imagine, granted you have the right emotion and strength, without needing to think all that hard about things. It should just work based off the emotion it’s for.

zfighter18

I’m not writing the standard basic GL ring though. That’s been a given since chapter 1. And yes you explicitly have to think all that hard. All the lanterns in media have gone through training and have years of experience both practice and on the job

Tape Man

1. Yes it has been established your not writing a bare minimum functions at least Lantern Ring. 2. The training for using the Ring is learning how to channel the emotion into the Ring to get it to construct your imagination. The imagination can be quite lacking though.

Alex k

Loving the direction Of this so far (also nice take on the ring) -will he ever get subspace storage at any point ??

Alex k

Oh shoot sorry my bad but can't wait for more ring development in terms of understanding a non standard Ai

Alex Weller

So, his Ring can pick up on stuff and warn him about it. Was getting a little worried there with how finicky Orin's Ring has been shown to be that all this would be going down with the space cop-in-training completely oblivious to it.

Hooli4ss

Binged the chapters and I gotta say…they were peak . When the Avengers pulled up? You got the vibe perfectly. Jan showed it “YES , YES,YES!” it was a fire moment indeed .Bro disrespect towards Fury was refreshing,lol. Fury acting like shit cool , the fuck ?😭 This shit deep boy . It was hilarious, then the nod of respect towards Cap. Fury’s fuming right now…and shaking in his boots. Question though , what the hell did he say to Kleiser ,lol?