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Chapter 1 Part 1 (remake) (Patreon)

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2021-08-14 21:58:05
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2026-06
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finally I’m done remaking the first part!! Added a little more to help foreshadow~ If you guys can, let me know what you think! Especially  if you can take the time to reread the first version!

Going to be remaking the first 2 chapters! Will update these on webtoon once I’m all done!

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Cassandra McCarr

I really like how you included some foreshadowing I feel like it hooks the reader in more compared to the original that’s on webtoon. I also like how you seemed to draw attention to the necklace since it seemed to react the closer she got to txeru. It made me want to know the story behind it especially since it wasn’t a detail included in the one on webtoon!

Rotaniah
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Thank you so much! I love how this turned out, it makes me feel so much better with the story as a whole. Just wait until you see what I have planned for the rest!!