Somethings Missing: Can you make this song Shiny-er? (Patreon)

I think my favorite song from the new album is "She's Shiny!" I got instrumentation from Nathan Deese and Samantha Gillogly. But so far, something is missing. I just can't figure out what I need to add.

Can you help?

Give it the song a listen? What kind of instrumentation would you love to hear with this song? I don't know if I'll be able to add it, but I'm open to every suggestion.

Thank you!