Feedback Please: Cat Kickstarter Video (Patreon)

My plan is to launch the Kickstarter for the third edition of Irish Drinking Songs for Cat Lovers on March 26th. To that end, I needed a video. I found a great cat adoption video on YouTube. I confess I parodied it closely, cuz it was awesome. You can watch that video here.

I finished my first video. I have a second I want to do as well, but I think this is a good start. Could you please let me know what you think? If you have any suggestions on how to improve it, I'm happy to hear them.

Thank you!