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As you can see, the pages had a lot of changes. 

Tammy being a bit more physical with her... pep talk. Cut that out to lessen the panels needed to draw, and I think it's too mean for Tammy to do that. This also had another version where she uh, berates Myan until she felt better (I'll post that next time). So, yeyyy, from physical to emotional!

And then the completely cut-out portion showing Myan entering the lion enclosure. Originally, the enclosure should be behind glass (less to draw), maybe even indoors. I had a lot of trouble coming up with a way for Myan to get in there without anyone noticing, and I think cameras are probably positioned to watch the entrances. I really didn't want to make this page since I think it's a waste. Good thing it occured to me to change it to outdoors with a fence and I remembered that she is a catgirl, which is waaayy better in my opinion.

Page 135 originally had Cruz asking "what if you don't like her boyfriend?". And sorry if I didn't indicate it, but I cut-out the bottom-left panel ("Cool, but can you now whip...").

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