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Hello backers!

This update includes minor changes to the Dog & Hound v0.2, clearing up linguistic concerns with the features in that draft. Please let me know if you think this is ready for prime time!ALSOI have recently wondered if Dog & Hound is too similar to Bloodhound Bruisers. A previous (unreleased) draft of this archetype was called Backalley Bulldog. Which do you prefer? Or do you have another suggestion for the Fight Club name?

Thanks,

Benjamin

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Dog & Hound, v0.3

Additional Fight Clubs, Expanded Hello! Presented here is the third draft of the Dog & Hound Fight Club for the Pugilist. Thanks for all the feedback on the first two drafts! In this revision, I've included a few linguistic changes to the features presented in the second draft. I've attempted to...

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Ben Fowler

Still have the same issues with the level 17 feature making the tweaks to its stats unclear. I don't care for Backalley Bulldog - it doesn't convey that you have a canine partner any more than Bloodhound Bruiser does. Maybe "Dog's Best Friend"? That messes with the synergy of the 3 and 11 feature names though. Maybe "Canny Canine" or "Cantankerous Canine"? "Doggy Duo"?