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I am working on the ending to this week's video, it's a comedy review as you are used to, but at the end I thought I'd try something new.

I have about half of this ending here, what I am unsure about is the script itself, what do you guys think?This is a spoiler of sorts, it doesn't give away exactly what the video is about, and I am planning on redoing this part, but still only watch if you are sure :D https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=efbuTlpMwqs 

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Garrick Johnson

It's well done, and Sagen-esque. I'm curious to see how you relate it to a comedy review, but you do well at merging levity with comedy.

jordyn zilkie

I like this, look forward to seeing the video and the second half of this!

Koko

People today seem now more than ever to resonate with deep thoughts, questions about life or even politics when it's delivered as a side dish to comedy. Look at comedians like Daniel Sloss, Bo Burnham or the many comedy news shows that air in the US. I guess it's easier for people to digeste it when it's seems more genuine. As when you take a serious moment in a comedy show.

Nicholas

I think you're hitting the mark here

Aleksey Bykhun

UpIsNotJump meets exurb1a! Is it Christmas already???

Phosphorus

It's like applying the infinite monkey cage on a cosmic scale, will be interesting to see how you move into this from a comedy video but it's not the first time you've done it and you've been highly successful in the past so I have full trust you can do it here too!

UpIsNotMemed

I liked it, it was intriguing and filled with existential dredd that didn't feel forced

Joel Devlin

Seems legit, what's the rub?

Pyrodelic

Can... can you just make a documentary?

SnoopyTheMage

Definitely like the feel of the clip. Excited for the rest of the video!

Mike Jones

Kinda hard to comment without full context but it sounds alright to me.

MysteryCryptid

I Like it! Deep and contemplating. I like listening to crap like that.

Stephanie Ann Irene Nowicki

Back in high school I was in honors physics and when we came across the subject that the universe is expanding basically broke me. I asked me teacher, he had no idea, and we both did research into it. It nearly broke him too. There were no answers. We also read a book in that class called "Einstein's Dreams" which is just as trippy and existential crisis inducing as trying to figure out what the universe is expanding into.

The Media Jack

Well written, read and mind blowing. I love it. It is the eye of the hurricane. There might be those who want a punchline all the time, rapid and constant. As Steve Martin shared in his auto-biography, he learned that a joke is a build up of tension with the punchline being the release of tension......but what if there was no punchline? The tension would have to be released somewhere at sometime. These are found to be the most genuine moments of connection and reaction. The audience invested finds what they are looking for, even if it wasn't what they are expecting