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Sketch - The Crawling City - 39 (Patreon)

Published:
2017-07-13 21:06:23
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2026-06
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Sketch for the upcoming one ´ w´ )
Is it confusing? Should I make Aria's blank mind/stare more noticeable? hahaha, hope you like it!

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Ugochi

Hi, I'm Brad too. Other than that, it looks great.

Versus

Lol! I was a little confused. Maybe make the blank stare a little more obvious!

PeriPeri

I think if keep the swirling eyes it will be fine, that will be noticeable when colored instead of changing it

Kage Ryu 「カゲリュ」

Oh gods yes Aria in an apron. I mean, not the best context, considering what might be going on here. But adorable as an outfit. Also it was noticeable for me that she has a blank stare. Though color would make it more obvious. Though it's generally easy to pick up if your draw eyes a certain way and your audience is used to that, and for scenes like this, the eyes stray from the original style, usually with less detail/highlights. But for new audiences, and for styles like this comic where your eye style is simple to begin with, it'll probably read better to go with the standard swirl or blank/gradient eye with no pupil. Which it seems you're going with the former anyway.

LeRezwarrior

Maybe make the swirl more predominate.

Cleo Olsson

yea i'd say less smile, or more smile and more dead eyes? (blank pupils?)