Small Problem - Page 26-28 (Patreon)

This is one scene from the old version I left untouched. Aside from recoloring and redrawing some lines (which took longer than I thought it would xD). I've been thinking a lot about how I could 'improve' these 3 pages, but in the end decided I didn't want to change anything about these. Enjoy the cringe again xD

And a question, I seperated these pages instead of making it one long page as I usually do (changed the starting pages like this a few days ago too) Does this work for those who have problems with patreon? (support still didn't get back to my last ticket)