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Page 51 (Patreon)

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2016-03-14 22:48:45
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tbh I'm not sure about this page >.> I just started drawing but I can't shake off the feeling that it's going to fast? Momo is pretty cheerful and energetic but... is this to fast? Shall I change this scene with some more pages inbetween?

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JaeHaruArt

It's up to you. I think Momo's fine being energetic and getting over thing's fast but if you want to expand in between that'd be cool too. When I feel stuck like this I tend to go back and read a number of pages to test the flow and see if I'm happy with it and if not I mess with it or change it up until I am : x but it's different being on the side of a reader and offering advice : / I'm not sure what you would change in the case of expansion or how it would read since I haven't seen it yet ^^; Still, I'm sure I'd love whatever you do! ><

Lucazu
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Thanks ^.^ Pondering so much over this xD I've been reading back, now part of me wants to edit it a little but another part wants to move on with the story already and get to the fun parts...For now I guess I'll move on and edit it later on (whenever I say such things I usually mean never >.>)