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Chapter 4 - Page 34 (Patreon)

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2016-07-14 19:04:39
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I just uploaded the page where Bryan reveals his plan on tapastic and smackjeeves. People pointed out it's cliche x.x I'm sorry if it is, I thought I had an original plot ._.

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Leola

I'm starting to not like Bryan because it seems he's trying to make this entertaining again like he did before when Momo was under the contract. He's seems to be the sadistic one in all this

JaeHaruArt

*SUPER BIG MEGA TASTIC HUG/GLOMP!* Don't let people's comments get to you! (I know first hand that's not easy to do) but seriously, don't let that get to you or get you down too much. Everything's "cliche" to a degree, you CAN only do so much or think of so much and there a BILLIONS of people in the world so chances are you aren't the first who've thought of it or thought like that in the end. What you did with it was GREAT and it fit perfectly for YOUR story. Keep going, don't get discouraged or feel less of yourself or your writing or down because of a few comments and please please don't take them to heart. Nobody sees it like you do and nobody can tell it like you, so just remember that. I still absolutely LOVE your story and I don't think it's "cliche" if that helps any. *heart* and please PLEASE don't feel the need to apologize.

Lucazu
>>2145051

*hugs* I love you xD You actually made me cry now geez ^^ I did get a little discouraged because I really thought it was original, I never read a story with similar plot, and then to hear that it's cliche and thus common just hurts a little... I don't want people to think I stole any idea's either :( Thank you for this... I feel a bit better about it now :) You're frigging awesome ;-;

Catalina Opazo

Ok, maybe in genres like shoujo it might be a little bit cliché like "let's get our revenge on the bully!" But, being a story in a BL context I think it is very original, because in most of the BL comics (especially yaoi manga) the plot is like this; - "top guy" is a sadist who bullies the "bottom" or "weaker character" by threatening him and when shit hits the fan (in any sort of way) it mostly follows with the top pinning down the bottom and screwing him several times against his will.......to finally (by any plot twist) wrap up the story with the bottom realizing he's in love with the bully top. The end.-😆 So, don't get discouraged nor feel bad. It is your story and, despite some people saying it's cliché, many of us have follow you in Patreon because we can't wait to find out what's next! So keep it up and good job!😉👍🏻

Lucazu
>>2145576

Thank you so much! ;O; I really felt a little down but you guys cheer me up ^^ now I feel excited to continue, especially working towards the (hopefully) not so cliche parts xD And yes, I guess it can always be more cliche by going the 'I fell in love with my rapist' route ^^ Thanks again!! You're awesome, Lots of love ❤️

Liezyl Blair

I honestly never thought your idea was cliché. I personally check your Patreon every single day to see what happens next because I can't predict what will happen. To me that makes it original. Not to mention how original your characters are. You will find that there will always be someone to put you down when it comes to art. Trust me I know! Most of the time they're just jealous because they couldn't come up with such a cool idea as yours first 😉 keep up the amazing work! I follow you because I find your art and story captivating and it's my favourite comic to read at the moment :) Just remember that you have a lot of fans, and I think we outweigh the haters ♡♡♡ can't wait for the next page!

Rae

yeah I'm with everyone else on this. If someone thinks it's cliche, then I don't know what they normally read, because like all the others.. most boy love comics include rape and detrimental shit that isnt even realistic nor relaly liked. 90% of people read 'their comics' cause its got sex scenes and people want to see it, they dont really pay attention to the plot and nor do they care. usually like your comic, you care about the story, you want it to be realistic.. a learning experience. If ppl think this is cliche lol then they need to be filled up with shit and tar and feathered bad.

Ellen

You lovely are NOT cliche. I have read so many comics but very few have I read that are not like all the others. Yours is soooooo unique that it has me bouncing up and down when I find out that there is an update. I have read it now about 10 times. I have no fear of read it over and over again. Why you may ask? Because it is unique and ever time I read it I see it a little differently. Please do not listen to the humans that bring you down. Surround yourself with people who appreciate your uniqueness. Look at us all here on Patreon. We are your family away from family, the family you have never met. We will ALWAYS be there for you. Please don't beat yourself up over the nay Sayers

Lucazu
>>2146108

Thanks so much! ❤️ Oh! I don't see those comments as haters though, I'm sure people didn't mean any harm. I just got a little discouraged by hearing something is cliche which I thought was original ^^ But you guys cheer me up and I'm really thankful for that! As long as it's not cliche in my own opinion and your dear readers it's all fine in the end afteral! :D Hearing you enjoy the comic so far makes me happy ❤️ thank you lots!

Lucazu
>>2146958

Thank you so much ❤️ plotless sexy comics can be fun though x3 heheh. This comic was originally plotless as I mentioned in the Q&A a while ago XD I can't remember when I started to create a plot for it, but it was quite early on and soon I started to care and work really hard on it yes :D Thanks again ❤️ I'm happy you're reading this comic and think it's not cliche ^.^

Lucazu
>>2147221

uwaaaahhh thanks so much ;O; That really means a lot and makes me happy! All you guys are so awesome ❤️ Ahh! you really read it many times? That's awesome x3 Whaaa I appriciate all of you so much ;-; I love you! Thank you!!!!

Angels-do-Exist

Bryan...you are a terrible friend >.> And i just realised that it ate half my response. I said that you're definitely not cliche. I mean sure trying to date the person to get revenge has been done. But how you got to that and a friend prompting him to do it. Especially in this genre, I don't think I've ever seen that. Additionally, we all get inspiration somewhere. And your characters and the way the story is progressing, it isn't easy to guess what's going to happen or anything like that. Its a lovely unique story.

Lucazu
>>2274291

Thanks so much :D And there's this one key, the other direction of this one > that marks the end of a message. It's quite annoying :(