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I just realized this is becoming a very long chapter xD

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PhoenixFyre

What is sad is you said Kruo has had a bad boyfriend before and it took a lot to fall for Momo whom he believe likes him. If he breaks his heart I have to wonder what will happen to Kuro mentally.

Brodie Smart

Aha Momo looks like such a derp in the first panel ^.^

Rae

goodness me, hoesnt seem to mind all that much. :p And it's not a long chapter, i reemmeber a smex scene lasting like 20 pages before...

Sakurabl0od

Momo, averting eye contact is a sure sign of uncertainty and doubt. It's also what people do when they lie and/or feel guilty. Please for the love of God be honest with him and yourself. If you don't want it he will understand. I know peeps here really want a hot sex scene, but it should be when they both truly want it. I'm getting more nervous for these boys by the minute. 😅 Also, love the pace of the chapter. Can't wait to see what happens. 😘

Lucazu

It's nice that you noticed the little details ^^ Momo really doesn't want it, but Kuro might notice it too in a bit :3 Thank you ^.^

Lucazu

haha they can be quite long :D I meant the overall chapter 5 though ^^ I usually cut it around 30-40 pages haha

The666Child

This is making my heart beat so hard in sadness..

David Wildfire

Sometimes change is good. I know I'd hate to see the big moment cut off due to the chapters end (I know it's not going to be the end of it but still 😋). On a side note I'm with Melissa and hope it's not going to be 'must have sex to get some payback'. Doing that is so dumb and never works out in the end.

Liezyl Blair

I feel so bad for Kuro D: I hope that Momo realizes his feelings for Kuro after this ♡

Courtney Smith

I don't know about with guys but with girls when you lose your virginity it attach you to that person in a way and judging how momo is it may be that way too once they get done he may still say he wants to hurt him but I don't think he truly wants to you don't let someone go that far especially not with your virginity just for revenge he may not admit it but he has strong feelings for kuro I mean blushing getting turned on staying turned on shy confused about it and they are so adorable also I'm not sure but is it kuros first time too I'm not sure because he had lube but the reason I ask is how he says he doesn't mind being mom's first so I'm just wondering if he said it like that cause he's thinking because your my first momo I mean we all know he doesn't just blurt stuff like momo lol :)

Courtney Smith

Where are you my favorite author lol

Lucazu

yeah true ^^ not going to cut it off just because the other chapters have less pages, you're right :3 Momo is a little dummy though, at this point he has mixed feels

Lucazu

Momo gets attached to Kuro along the way more than he will admit ^^ feelings will grow :3 It's not Kuro's 1st time, he had a (very bad) boyfriend before. But he will be the first person for Momo, he meant that he doesn't mind that Momo is a virgin.