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What do you think of this comic so far? :3 I'm not too sure myself, maybe it's gotta pick up the pace a bit. But yeh, if you have feedback so far, positive or negative let me know, I'm in a bit of a doubt phase I guess xD

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Stephanie

It does seem to be moving slow BUT it is just starting and you are also doing another story on top of this one

Lucazu

Thank you :) That's what I was thinking too, it being a bit of a slow start. Gonna work on it <3

Koffee n Kookies

I like where this is going 🥰 It's slowly getting a pace, but I thought it's bc there are two comics going on, so I don't mind. Actually, I like it when the story is not rushed, so that we can notice the details and development better

Vilinda

I think it's perfectly paced at the moment. It only feels slow at the moment because we're only at the beginning. I notice Dory is a hopeless romantic, a dreamer, awkward, and definitely gay.

Noel

I like it. I think it just feels that way because we’re all obsessed with Krish and Damien’s developments. Lol

Lucazu

haha I'm glad about that too, I'm enjoying writting their little story

Chiral_Leaf

For a minute I was thinking, wait is Jimmy actually the love interest. But no... He hasn't even asked her out. And Leon is on the cover...

Chiral_Leaf

I mean... Dory might be willing to let his dick join the hamster crickets... At least Leon ;) ( oh wait, the Loser Cricets... sorry)

TK Taiamoni

I like this comic. it’s refreshing! keep it up! i agree it’s moving a little slow but i like it so far!

kylee trusty

I think a lot of good stories don’t have a rushed start. I’m enjoying it so far! I know in some of your previous comics the shorter character of the love interests are really outgoing, silly, and maybe a bit irritating at times lol but Dory isn’t giving me that vibe as much which I really like. It seems like Leon is the outgoing one of the two. I’m a fan so far!!!

Shaina

I really like the pacing so far! I love a good back story, so I’m enjoying getting to know Dory and Leon. I also like how Dory’s personality is so sensitive yet kind.

Lucazu

It's still undecided :P I rarely have a set script in mind, could even be another person xD

Lucazu

Thank you :D Yeh I switched it up this time, although I'm not sure if Leon is gonna be the other lead, could go many ways still ^^