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Sleepy Kuma or drunkard?

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Khief

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Khief

The real question now is how close Myu will be to Nadettes final weight with all this training 💙💙💙

Shapeshifter10

It feels wrong that the first time in myu’s life she experiences what it’s like to feel full regularly, eat a lot, have a feeder and find progress in combatting her conditioning (the biggest milestone she could possibly have) is all contributing to a completely different form of expansion tied with the uphill battle of her life’s mission. Let alone most of it off camera during a time skip. This just isn't log myu.

Suguru Kinniku

Well beer does make me sleepy, could be the same for Nadette

Curtis Ibsen

Myu is now officially a balloon. Inflating and deflating like one.

SomeLostLeo

It's unfortunate to see how much body fat Myu has lost since this training arc started. Feels like so much progress has been lost while she's trying to combat her condition instead of taking the easy path she learned about BEFORE this training.

pixiveo

I believe it's been clearly established what all of this is ultimately building toward. I don't really see why the results of Myu's efforts leading first to some form of expansion wouldn't fit into the comic, especially when it's been a recurring subtheme, by far the one that received the most exposition. Now, as for why it happens off-screen and only shows the outcome, it's simply because there's not enough progress at once to add real value compared to the recent eating and expansion scenes. A tiny bit of progress over time doesn't justify a dedicated scene.

pixiveo

You've made it clear that it was not your cup of tea, but the weight has migrated, not vanished. What one loses, another gains.

Shapeshifter10

That’s the problem, the sub themes constantly take over the main one while the main one is treated like a sub theme itself, being treated as it is no real value. Her having enormous breasts will severely diminish her efforts to gain weight after her training as it will take a long time to have the rest of her weight catch up with her life Midori’s did, making more about myu being a neko with enormous breasts than a neko struggling but working towards her life mission of being fat. It being explained isn’t the problem, it’s that it’s completely different from what the rest the the comic has spent a massive amount of time building up, significantly more than the one that’s replacing it now. Just because the weight’s shifting somewhere else doesn’t mean she’s still fat anymore or that her progress isn’t being removed any any progress made will be overshadowed by her chest expansion completely. It was already made a plot point with ilya

pixiveo

If breast expansion (which isn't mentioned in this page) is what you were talking about and not belly expansion (which I was referring to in my reply), then I understand even less what you see as an issue. Or rather, I'd understand if it had taken over? But it's hardly been the focus, just 4 pages out of the last 30. I'm a bit confused.

Fulgrim200

Im really liking this build up, can’t wait to see how all this training will pay off

Shapeshifter10

To summarize what I’m saying is that when you make your story and main characters primary goal her weight gain that makes it the story and character progression. When it gets taken away, especially in favor of a separate expansion, it regression. Myu isn’t continually experiencing expansion and there just happens to be a separate kink involved, it’s picking one over the other. You mentioned to someone else that the weight had been shifted, but that doesn’t make it any better. Just because myu is undergoing expansion at all doesn’t mean it’s the same thing just different. It’s a completely different concept not matching the previous story progression and character goal. It doesn’t matter that it’s only happened for four pages after setting it up for thirty, the issue is that it’s happening at all at the expense of weight gain, the concept tied directly to the main characters progression. This isn’t like the the weight gain in Midori where we get ample amounts of what her perusing her goal is like, then adding a twist with another fetish that still progresses her breast expansion, nor is it like the weight loss where it happened after an abundance of content about the very thing the comic was about and giving a very clear means as to how she would get it back. If this is also temporary and there’s some means to shift the weight back to where it was then it makes this seem like an unproductive detour for the sake of it

Bluepen Greenpen

Just wanted to say, I really appreciate Log Myu's existence and Pix for sticking at it. It's rare to get a WG story that runs this long with a solid story and a good cast – I can't think of another example where the things haven't fallen to bits by the time it hits 600 pages. You've done great work.