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When that one calm person suddenly make a face you've never seen...

(I edited Zina's dialogue on the previous page because it didn't come across as I expected, making her appear unreasonable whereas her concern was about not willing to be left out, tinged with a bit of insecurity).

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Blazingfox77

The fat team can now begin 😈

Crawley

holy shit dude I can't fucking wait for spring

Shapeshifter10

I feel like Rena jumping in to explain to Zina this was her idea was a pretty bad move on her part. Also, even with the previous pages dialogue edited it’s still equally unreasonable and, let’s be honest, in character for zina. It feels just like when she ditched myu when she specified she *didn’t* objectify her.

SomeLostLeo

Wasn't there a graph earlier that showed how the elixir would affect each race that drank it? If so, weren't Kitsunes one of the ones that were more likely to gain from it?

LordMaul

Holy shit, zina that is too much elixir.

SlimeyJayStudio

Huh so she looks like to be the missing 3rd contestant. How about that

Curtis Ibsen

Just to point out; "Secret" should be "secrets." Also I did reread the last page and the rewrite was much better.

Icarusty

The question is: will Zinna lose weight and be the third member of the entourage? Or will she balloon from the nectar and Rena will have to join the team instead?

Icarusty

How is Zina gonna both gain and lose weight from the nectar lol

Curtis Ibsen

I meant to both Zina and Rena.