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I feel like I'm constantly fumbling with Hellion and ngl I just want to skip to the parts where they look like this!! It's been difficult finding the motivation to continue as it is now because it's still coming off as confusing/hard to follow and people have actually given up on trying to read it

This is what the majority of the comic is supposed to be like and idk why I keep trying to start it off in a darker setting. It's too obscure, too dramatic, I'm struggling to convey my ideas... This comic is supposed to be kind of like a "slice of life" comic but in the life of these angelic/demonic beings. 

This is Grace and Glory in their usual state as "Heavensent"  but what's currently shown in the comic is them in "Hellwalker" forms. I have all kinds of lore and world building for this comic that I need to figure out how to share in a way that makes sense and is fun to read ;3;

If you're following/have followed this series, I'm so sorry it's been such a mess. I'm hoping it will all come together as I see it in my head and I hope that it will be more enjoyable to read soon enough

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Raven

Aggressively wiggles eyebrows

Paw Kitty

I enjoy Hellion very much, even with the reboots and I look forward to seeing where you take us in the story

4RESNA

I love these designs and I love what you’ve done with Hellion so far!! Keen to see how it all unfolds

Devilish Demons

Hellion is a story I've been following since the beginning and no matter how many times you need to reboot it, I'll always be ready to read ^^ I hope you're able to find the right point to start off with foe yourself! I can't wait to see where it goes.

lyss

Personally, this is one of my favorite comics you've started ❤️

Ncarni

I did kind of find it hard to follow but I still enjoyed the art regardless and still go back and reread the pages that you have posted. 💕

Emma

honestly i love hellion, the mood and art is perfection. maybe its not for everyone and but personally i enjoy it so much. i can imagine that it is difficult to keep up motivation and keep it going when it feels like ur audience isnt connecting as well to the story as ur other pieces.

Keli'i Bacos

I still love it.. the art is great and the characters are interesting. Sure i may not completely understand, but hey, I’m still loving it.

Allan Meyer

Overkill, Chokechain, BOP and Gomorrah:Repent, etc. have or had storylines that could be followed so please don’t doubt your storytelling ability. Maybe it just needs another pass and some time. May I also please note your art style is literally unique, and appreciated greatly.

Jade

Love the designs 🥰🥰🥰

Tam_Rowna

If you feel like people are having a hard time understanding it, might be a good idea to find a point to pause at and go back and see about connecting them with the stories that go with them before you continue. It should also be able to give you a wider range of telling the story. Cause it sorta sounds like octopath traveler 1, unless you invest in all side quest and chapters, the secret boss and the other ones make sense on how all characters intertwine for the final encounter.

Mephisto Rabino

Hello! I remember the first few pages of this comic as it was coming out new. I thought, "Holy sh!t! They're trying a new format/style! These long pages are a continuous piece, not a 'segmented comic,' this is wild!" I love that I didn't know where it's going, or what's happening. I'd equate it to Elden Ring a little - I was immersed but didn't necessarily know the lore/story behind it, and that was ok! I think this subscription based approach with your current portfolio might lend itself to people wanting to see the seggs right away. Nothing wrong with that, but it seems like that wasn't your intent or vibe when starting this comic*. Nothing wrong with that either. I'm honestly such a fan of your work, and the CONSISTENCY with which you release new content, that I'm gonna be happy with anything you do (pssssst, AND I AM!). I recently went through a, "where can I cut some subscriptions to save on money" review and you were at the top of my, "gotta keep cause they regularly come out with UH-MAY-ZING content" list. I'm RAMBLING. Anyway, I hope this helps scrounge up some motivation for you, cause I love it and can't wait to see more! <3

Asia Butler

I loved how obscure the story is!! Let alone the style! Maybe taking a little hiatus in the series may help refresh some of that motivation? It sounds like burnout a little. :(