Spooky maid project idea (page 1-2) (Patreon)

ok so. i know i posted about thsi in discord, and most of you voted on brown hair.... but, as this project is alittle dark. i though it better to add a splash of colour with her hair... sorry Dolls! XD also, i feel like shes missing something, mybe once i give a story breift you dolls may have some feed back/ideas? ok, the story:A young man is transported into a decayin mansion only to wake transformed into a sissy maid. trapped in spooky and eerie new form, the mansion is filled with unknown horrors within its shadowy halls.

can the maid escape this nightmares? or will they be trapped here forever?this is just the first twop pages, im working on there next page, where they encounter a human doll enemy owo.what you think? would really appracite feed back on this idea. im thinking of doing a cannon page, where they move on to the next encounter or outfit they have to wear. and a alt bad ending after each encounter, say the doll enamy next, the alt bad ending could be they are turned into a doll etc etc