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Dream us page 1 (Patreon)

Published:
2017-02-16 02:56:50
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2026-06
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5$+ Patron will receive the textless version 

10$+ Patrons will receive the PSD file

To receive this reward you have to pledge before 1st March, reward will be sent out around 7th March.  

Guys help me out with English, grammar, typos etc my english is so bad..Thanks for your help! 8)

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Comments

Shimmerhex

Lmao you basically nailed the bronze player mindset.

PeppermintBanana

The English seems fine. Some of it could be a little more proper but for the most part it's alright for the comic. Looks great so far can't believe this is happening. So ready to watch this come to life. Let's go Tofuu!

Silvia Drachma

My problem is either Jg's or bottom lanes, the jg's don't see a clear dragon steal if everyone on the enemy team is getting tower, he'd rather get krugs or gromp, and adc's?, feed and blame the support for their feeding, specifically Draven's. ;p

Hungy

Some grammar stuff. Change "I can't even remember it..." to simply "I can't even remember..." Change "Why I can't win.." to "Why can't I win.." Could possibly change "Is there a curse on me?" to something like "Do I have some sort of curse?" but your original one still sounds fine. Overall good English though.

Colin

Must be playing Overwatch in the gold bracket

0Blueaura Sebastian 0001

As long as you have fun man. Its all good, your English for me is far from broken

Dragos

I've only ever noticed a single mistake in spelling or grammar from you, and that's saying something as I'm a bit of a grammer nazi