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Just curious.... (Patreon)

Published:
2025-04-11 06:13:01
Edited:
2025-04-11 06:16:20
Imported:
2026-06

Poll

Just curious....

  • I like the pace, and I think the sexual progression is correct 67
  • I think the story has started to move a little too fast, but not a big problem 11
  • The pacing is off, sex is progressing too quickly and there are other inconsistencies in the story 5
  • 2025-04-11
  • 83 votes
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Content

How is the pacing of the story at the moment and do you find it inconsistent or moving too fast?

P.S, I have my own mind and make my own decisions, don't worry. But sometimes there is some room for feedback

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Comments

Greasyllama

The pace in general is good. The only time it felt off to me was actually the latest update: I think the part you skipped was the most important (between the elevator confrontation and hotel room). Felt a bit abrupt: I realized I really wanted to see the buildup to that moment, and Wandas thoughts upon acceptance, the drive, and immediately before the act. ...As well as the initial disrobing together

Newbe163

Have to agree with the comment of Greasyllama. Especially if you run the female path of the story, where the relationships to Nicole, Faye, Lulu and possibly others will develop, it is nice to see the full development of Wanda changing. Also with the two paths for Lulu and Faye....

me

I think the pacing is good as it relates to Faye because let's not forget that Wanda was down to allow the massage from the very beginning and even protested when Faye stopped. BUT I think the pacing with Lois however needs to feel like more of a victory for Wanda. Something she actively campaigns for.

ayaan qureshi

the pacing is absolutely perfect , wanda has senses her feelings , and everything is beautiful , pop you have great talent and im sure you will go very high in future

ayaan qureshi

for every update we have very high expections from you , please dont keep us in suspense at end of update , please end the update with beautiful orgasm or S*x,