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Hey everyone, I know you noticed that the Naruto Fanfic is getting few chapters on Patreon. Honestly, writing a fanfic where the MC is a god is harder than I thought. Despite my plans, trying to create plots and character developments while trying to balance his powers and what the Light Web can provide for believers is a huge headache.

I've been trying to think of how I can develop the story for a few days now, but it's been really hard.

I'm wondering if I will still try to develop this and maybe think of another way to maintain that, or if I just put it aside and start another novel for you here on patreon, as I feel it's more value for your money than have two stories here, while I also feel like it's not exhausting to do that.

Of course, if I make another story, probably the amount of daily chapters won't be as high as Game Maker, since that's my main focus on Patreon, and the protagonist will probably just be a human without System instead of a God like from Naruto, where I can write without having to think so much about the repercussions of each act that the protagonist decides to choose, and without so much work to balance powers lol

(I'm not planning to release this new novel on Webnovel yet, it will be a Patreon thing for now)

Comment your thoughts about it, your opinion is very important for me.

Comments

StrawberryMilkHeretic

While I love reading Became A God it’s understandable why writing such a story can be hard and frustrating so I won’t fault you if you decide to discontinue it. Besides I’m amazed at what you’ve already written. It’s really your choice to use your wonderful creative ability for what you want to write as an author. And while readers might get upset I think authors have the freedom to write what they want. Anyways sorry for the long rant.

Kluvial

Yeah it seems like you walked into a corner with the power level and influence that a god naturally carries. I don’t remember what the story was but it said that a gods influence over a world has to be almost not perceivable for true BELIEF to exist. If you know something is real you don’t need to believe in it or something. I don’t know how you can move forward in this story (not like it’s impossible or anything just idk) but I wish you the best of luck. —personally though I hope you start something else because it’s not my personal preference. I love game maker though and I hope you can keep it going.

Matheu DeWitt

Its easier to write for characters like that with using other characters as the main focus of the mc as a god. It is easier to instead of making the mc grow with plot development, but instead have the mc's reputation grow and change with plot development. Then you can write and ideas will flow more easily. Just focus on a few people from the villiages and tell the story of how the MC is changing things and how his reputaiton is growing or suffering because of certain things.

Cmols897

One idea I had was that the main plot can be set in the gods realm, and things like Naruto or Harry Potter or any other I.P. can be like a little side thing/setup for the next antagonist. The first one could be Jashin where instead of fighting in the Naruto world they fight in the gods world. That way you can still have bad guys match/be stronger than Apollo without destroying the world they are trying to gather followers from. Or it could be like the Civ. Games and have holy wars

Thereader

its fine to do sidestories in the same universe if you absolutely have to write something but if its to hard take a little break from it.

Ototsu_Yume

Honestly you do you bud, write what you enjoy writing, personally I find your skills in the Game Maker type novel with many intermingling characters flowing between one another to be especially high; you would probably do exceedingly well with a dimensional chat/guild (even if you did a unique spin on it as say; an intermediary or admin) or cafe type novel, you could still play around with some games in that one or introduce trade between worlds and the like if that's something you enjoy. (Fortune's Favors by Flameclawsxx over on FF might give you ideas)

RackOfLife

I like that the mc is a god but I can see the difficulty you can have the mc focus more on the god realm and have the the world's as a side thing and you can focus more on the pov of his followers and how his presence changes the plot

Jairo M Ch

In general, stories from the perspective of a god can be expanded to include other worlds (universes) and create modes that can chat or trade between them or that there are conflicts with other gods for believers or even changes of perspective to other characters such as the sister of the protagonist and their relationship and support between them and their worlds. good stories and take some time and consider how you want to take the story

Cisco

I like both stories, I think your doing great 👍

Son-Of-Scorn

I really like the Naruto story, it’s unique but if you don’t think you can keep it going on the level it’s at then it’s best to stop rather than lower the quality

Camilo S

acabo de leer este fanfic y es el estilo de fanfic que mas me gusta que triste que lo detuvieras